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CelticX 5/17/12 . chapter 30
Another tremendous chapter. The backstory is just as intriguing and enchanting as the tale itself.

Next chapter please _
EJ Daniels 5/16/12 . chapter 30
I have to say that I really enjoy the steps back in time and the view on how the dynamics between the three of them developed. I do hope you'll enlighten us, your readers, on just how things fell apart in that missing year without the "glue" there to hold them together. Well written as usual my friend.

Keep in mind that we all have our own take on the pairings and just how they are to us. This is of course what makes our stories uniquely ours or in this case yours. Tell your story and don't compare it to anyone else as this is your vision you're being kind enough to share with us.

Kind Regards,

EJ Daniels
KittyAttack 5/15/12 . chapter 29
Interesting...curious as to where this goes.
usagiharuka 5/3/12 . chapter 29
So Amane and Hikari are meeting the family and spending the holidays together cant wait to see the parents reaction to amane and hikari relationship since they are Catholic.

So is Shizuma and Nagisa going to spend the holiday together? Is nagisa going introduce Shizuma to her aunt. How is Nagisa going to react when she finds out Tamao knows her aunt and background? i feel Nagisa is going to be pissed that Tamao been lying to her face.

I hope this meeting ends well for Miyuki.

How are Yaya and Tsubomi spending their holiday?

When are we going to see Chikaru and Shion going to get started?

Kizuna and Remon need to sit down and talk!
EJ Daniels 5/3/12 . chapter 29
As always a delightful read. Very cute interactions in the greenhouse to say the least. Nagisa and Shizuma ... le sigh! I know your schedule is crammed pack with stuff so slow updates are better than no updates!

Kind Regards,

EJ Daniels
TheNomade5 5/2/12 . chapter 29
"My dear, sweet queen piece" favorite line of the chapter XD! Anyway I simply just love this story and how long the chapters are, I don't want them to end :)!
insomniac1970 4/17/12 . chapter 28
Wow! Am I ever sorry that I didn't find this story earlier! You have added so much depth to these characters and fleshed out their motivations brilliantly. The biggest surprise is your Tamao. I rooted for her as much as I did for Nagisa while watching the anime the first time. Yet, this Tamao is stronger and more willing to go toe-to-toe with the Queen of the Campus, Shizuma. I'll be honest, I always sensed that Kagome could be a rival of Shizuma and Tamao for Nagisa. I don't know why considering that Kagome is a Lulim student and a 7th grader (I know, 1st year). A great story keeps it readers on their toes, and yours does that. Good work!
CelticX 4/13/12 . chapter 28
Everyone knows how real life can sometimes interfere with the things we'd rather be doing, but it is understandable and we accept it.

That being said, great chapter! _ I look forward to your next offering.
KittyAttack 4/12/12 . chapter 28
I never really cared or paid attention to those of Le Rim, beside Chikaru. Love the school, but the characters didnt spike my interest.

Good chapter anywho :3
bigtomato 3/31/12 . chapter 26
Do I sense a crushing blow approaching Yaya-chan?

How would she react? o.O Angry? Crushed? Apparently nonchalant and uncaring... yet not?
usagiharuka 3/23/12 . chapter 27
Love how Nagisa and Shizuma relationship is progressing "My panties are wet" lol wonderful. I love how Amane is like its all good handle your business. Hikari winking like been there done that. Can't wait to see Yaya get Tsubomi in a compromising position :)When are we going to see Shion/chikaru connect?
CelticX 3/22/12 . chapter 27
The insight you gave us into the past relationship between Tamao and Shizuma was quite telling and quite wonderful. Once again you show us how Tamao is just as strong and just determined as Shizuma, even if they sometimes follow different sets of rules, and how quickly Nagisa is growing into her new role as Shizuma's "partner."

And I love the way Nagisa, finally, simply gave in and allowed her desires to lead the way.

Now, about that late night fridge raider buzzing around . . .

Next chapter please _
KittyAttack 3/22/12 . chapter 27
Niceeee. Poor Nagisa xD

Great chapter lol.
EJ Daniels 3/22/12 . chapter 27
Oh a little happiness with the main couple, how very nice! Curses upon Yaya and Tsubomi for poor timing! Poor Shizuma, she must be a little frustrated at this point. Nagisa finally doesn't run away and they get interrupted instead! None the less it was a wonderful chapter!

Kind Regards,

EJ Daniels
EJ Daniels 3/16/12 . chapter 26
What a delightful chapter. I love Shizuma even more with her take on Tamao! You knew that already though lol! It's a wonderful story you're telling here I just hate having to wait for the next chapter!

Kind Regards,

EJ Daniels
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