So intense. So dramatic... and what a lesson.

I love the story. And I loved the show.

very good keep up the good work

Very nicely done, JC, you've captured the essence of Peter in this story. I enjoyed reading it! :-)

Very good. Well written, atmospheric, and descriptive. Is this a fan fiction or did you make it up? I don't know what Shaolin I still really enjoyed it.

Great! Another Fu Fic and this was is good! That poor woman. Makes you think that if you ever got that depressed and down that some one like Peter Caine would be there to talk to. He sounds like his dad! LOL! Going to read the next part now!