This was a really nice one shot... aometimes i did miss the depth... and u made me cry!

I was very intrigued and or I enjoyed how you took Draco's "snakiness" to a new level

This was so good!

Ha, this WAS funny, but I think it leaned more on the side of angst... Well, whatever. I liked it. Thx!

Silly draco, he played and acted like hermione and pansy knew he would...

I'm too old for this silliness now-outgrown and all that-and should've stopped hours ago but I can't! This is too perfect! Where were you all my fandom-life?

In a more sane vein, the snake conceit is brilliant. Love the original fable, of course, but the increasingly quirky (and increasingly-thinly-veiled) developments are even better. by far.

What a very charming story. Love it.

And lastly-I almost didn't notice at all, ashamed to admit-what a perfect subversion of the Iago lines at the beginning! I was going to scroll up there and point them out as a perhaps too dreary/Literature-with-a-capital-L opening for this (humor) target audience, my own fond feelings notwithstanding, but now I see what you did and it is AWESOME. Indeed, the snake is not what he is, and he can wear his damn heart on his sleeve when he likes it.

Goodness, I haven't reviewed in over 2 years. But, this is the best story I've read in a really, really, REALLY long time. You're an absolutely amazing writer. I love the stories about the snakes in between. It really made me, I don't know, connect with the story more. I can't explain it but it's really good. YOU'RE really good. And this story is just so... real. These aren't your characters but they way you write them, they're as good as yours.

Thanks for sharing this with us. I always look forward to your stories. :)

Excellent story. I quite enjoyed the spacing with those little stories throughout. Well done.

Aw, loved it. Love love loved it.

Been a while since you've posted stuff.. Loved the story :) "My son, I thought you were a snake" lol.. But yes.. The snake analogies were great.. ranging from funny to touching to sympathy. Hope you update your other stories soon too ! :)

I like the little anecdotes in between the real story. Very interesting. :)

Ooh, this was REALLLLLLY good. I loved all the different versions of Draco via snake, and it was a great read. Keep up the fantastic work!

Great story, love the little stories in between too )