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This is a well thought out story From the first chapter to the last your story’s just sweep the reader away the central characters are true to there canon
Which let the reader relate to them which is key in holding the read interest and getting the reader hook on your story.
So thank you for the enjoyment your story has given me and this is a very good set up story and I hope to see a follow up to it one day
all the best Carick

A great fic, even greater that its finished!

Adventure, Action, but no Romance so you really need to get that in the sequel.

Thanks.

Ok this is action!

And a cliffy, you are evil.

You have gone for a slow build up, lots of background and character development. That's good, but some action would be nice too. Action can be a fight, a nightmare where we get to experience it too, anything more than just day to day stuff.

For burial details. IDK either, so no complaints.

For details you don't know, the net is great for looking things up.

Still confused, cause there is conflicting stuff out there, then either gloss over it or make it up.

Its your fic.

A great tho horrific start.

As the fic is complete now all I can give is praise or constructive crits.

And thank you for writing and posting too.

A good finish. Thanks for sharing the story with us.

I like the way you brought the story to a close. Xander, Willow, and Cassie are on the road to joining SGC. Once Rya’c joins they’ll be the second coming of SG-1. Thanks for sharing this with us.

FANTASTIC! :)

Well looks like the future is set and all the alien badies should watch out, good chapter

lol enjoyed it very much! looking forward to more of your stuff.

what a lovely ending

Interesting end...

I really enjoyed the story.