AWSOME AND I WILL HAVE TO ADMIT IT DID

u know...

blu could've been like

ummm... you.. uh...you,you,you...uhh

jewel

ya i do

blu

yay

yeah that was fucked up but um... ;)

Wow... This is awesome, how comes it didn't fit into your story?

i just have to tell you this ( please i know i ll be insulting you but its the true and I DONT WANT TO HARM YOU JUST TELL YOU WHAT I FEEL:

WTF! ARE YOU FUKING KIDING ME! YOU ARE AND IDIOIT FOR NOT PUTING THIS SCENE ITS 10 TIMES BETTER AND MORE TEASING( exept the end that it sais the next chapte about)

sory to shout but it really gets on my nerves that you didnt wrote this on that chapter its much more harny than the otherone

I keep having a feeling there might be a deleted scene between the end of chapter 7 and the beginning of chapter 8, i just think it might be funny.

I'm guessing jewel did some special reading while Blu was out learning to live in the jungle, and I bet $50 that Blu readed tons of book on sex when he lived in the U.S, lololololo

Tis one was better.

This is another incredible sex scene! In my opinion, this scene is better than the other one you made. This sex scene was longer and contained more than the other one. To me, this scene focused on love and Blu and Jewel becoming mates just as much as the other scene. This one also included more pleasure. Of course, I was turned on by this (again, I'm not a pervert) and I can't wait to read more of these scenes!

Wow dude this was good lol best lemon ever I notice you updated life after the jump to I can't wait to read that tomorrow I would tonight but I got freaking school tomorrow but this was really good night going to lie lol keep up the good work bro

To be honest, I liked this ''lemon'' more than the other one. I lol'd when I saw ''(like a penis going into a vagina)'' But the other one made them sound more like mates than a couple having sex (I do agree with you on that)

lol, I love the question at the end. and for your answer, ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm. NO. lol

fair reasons, i guess.

This was a very nice scene! I can't wait to read more of these scenes soon!

thats was a pretty good scene cant wait to read more dude

XD

It's actually a pretty good scene! Shame it never made it in the story though.