love this so far pleeeeeeeeeeeease continue, I know its been a long time but I love the characters and how you write them

Wow. There's a lot of emotion in this story. I loved how Neil actually shows he has a heart. A big heart. And do does Brian. But we already knew that. Neil McCormick has to be my most favorite character in anything. Ever. So what that he's fucked up? Who isn't know days?

It's a good story, I enjoy reading it. Though, you need to work on your English, buddy. And try to correct the spelling/writing mistakes you sometimes make. Make it more clean, you know. Good story otherwise. :)

A great start MS is one of my favs too you are doing it justice keep up the good work.