Your summary isn't that bad, right up until the part where you say it's a bad summary.

As for the story itself, what I've read so far is interesting, but it could use a little polish here and there, mostly small spelling mistakes.

Nice story so far, though there are a few mispellings, but not much. Adel and Tez seem pretty mysterious, and with their looks and the clan thing I think I might have an idea on what they are... Or not. Authors are unpredictable lol.

Vartai?