|Reviews for This Is Not Our Fate|
| anthony11899 12/25/12 . chapter 10
and now i see the really masters or gods of the cylons in this fanfic and i say that was a big shocker. good job making me surprise with that, keep up the great work. also i am crediting you but for some reason i thinking i'm writing this in a sarcastic tone but i'm not, strange to me.
| Janizary 8/14/12 . chapter 1
Found this through random fishing on the daily updates on ME, and a referal link. Really like what you've done here. Hope to see it continue.
| Shamazaki 3/31/12 . chapter 3
Good the filler is ending, my only complant is the lack of the Mass Effect universe. But I assume you will take care of that later.
Hopefully I don't have to say what's wrong with this "green utilities with the slaves rolled up" XD
One last question, is Shepard or any of his crew mates appearing in this fic?
| Shamazaki 3/31/12 . chapter 2
Can't say much about a filler chapter besides that the characters came off as a little two dimensional. I would have suggested that you go deeper into their thoughts and spend more time with them so that they would make an impression on the reader.
Not so much of a grammatical error but it still bothered me "the coolant junctions were notoriously poorly designed." A better way of stating that would have been "the coolant junctions were notorious for their poor design."
Also is Mercury the name of the ship or its class? That part confused me.
| Shamazaki 3/31/12 . chapter 1
Wow i'm impressed, you know how to give a good opening. The space combat was interesting and already the fight is starting to emerge.
It's a really good hook, I haven't even seen BSG but I liked it.
I did find one grammatical issue though "In a brief, silent flash of light the Valhallawas gone." You're missing a space.
Overall a well written chapter.
| MunchkinRangler 3/30/12 . chapter 12
I love this story so please update soon!
| Just a Crazy-Man 2/24/12 . chapter 12
| bh18 2/18/12 . chapter 12
Great job with this, really. It's great how you've managed to make this work! One problem, minor but, next to the Battlestar name you put BS-insert number. It should be BSG, as in Battlestar Group. Get it? Minor, kinda nit picking but it's a little annoying.
| EvilTheLast 2/15/12 . chapter 12
| Major Simi 2/13/12 . chapter 12
well, good chapter a bit short, but ok
| EvilTheLast 1/21/12 . chapter 11
Just read the first 11 chapters. Interesting story. I just wish I knew more about Mass Effect.
| Robo Reader 21 1/20/12 . chapter 11
Surprise they still think they're Cylons. I'm sure by now they would've taken the hint.
While admirable of him, there was no way they could've made it out of the ship with all those civilians. I hate to say this but they would've been a liability.
Well thats the end of their story. They held out better than expected. All thats left is the transport and its got nowhere to go.
| Major Simi 1/20/12 . chapter 11
uh oh not good for the colonials. well good and interesting chapter
| Major Simi 1/2/12 . chapter 10
so saving by destroyen, well an interesting thing. well looks like the collectors are already here. good chapter
| Robo Reader 21 1/1/12 . chapter 10
What can they do? Once the Cylons come in with upgraded ships, the Colonials don't stand a chance? They might as well start packing up a refugee fleet now.