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Can yo maybe put an extra rider soon

This is totally awesome! PLEASE KEEP WRITING OR ELSE I SHALL OFFICIALLY BE READY TO DIE! Hurry update quick. And keep writing!

Well, good this is. I'll be frank; I want in. I just finished the Inheritence series and I just started searching for Eragon fics tonight. Please PM me if you would allow me to join next chap or the chap after that-you can decline, it's ok. Anyway, I like this fic. It has earned itself a place with my favourites! (Not an easy accomplishment.) I AM A FAN OF MURTAGH AND NASUADA! Remeber Galbatorix's illusion of her and Murtagh?

And I think this should be the cover

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Sorry wouldn't let me post the picture

P.S. New so I have no idea how to post more than once on a chapter

When r u updating? This is pretty much my favorite fanfic. yet.

I think Eragon should have been the first person to talk to the rider, after all, he is the master, and the teacher, Aviella is the student, despite her past lives. I think Aviella's prophecy about the sun and moon would fit better in a later chapter

it happened a little fast, and the arrival of the first dwarf rider in history should have had more celebration than just "the festivities resumed"

so...I understand now why she was more powerful than Eragon...so I guess you could forget that earlier post.

I love your notes at the end of this chapter, lmbo. I find it interesting that you made Angela/Aviella as Formora...I understand the elves fury and upset, and love Glaedr's wisdom. But why didn't anyone mention that Murtag is just as much a traitor as she is, and they trust him. That was the first arguement that popped into my head, but, as Oromis once said, no two people think alike, and even with the best logic, no two elves will come up with the same exact answer.

I like the idea of Angela being a changling, in fact, it rather explains a lot. But when did Angela die and become Aviella? At the beginning of the story, I was under the impression that it began only a few weeks after the end of Inheritance, Aviella is 15, that's a pretty big inconsistancy.

I love the storyline so far, but I have to say that I am annoyed that Aviella seems so much more able than Eragon. Eragon is far from perfect, and is by no means invulnerable or all powerful, but Aviella is so...perfect? You even said she was more powerful than Eragon. She's his student...and with all that she's done, it makes Eragon look more like a figurehead than a real leader.
Anyway, I may be baised when it comes to Eragon. Rest assured, I can't wait to read the rest of your chapters :)

Interesting read, but the chapters are really compact, in a disappointing way. The style in which you write is distracting from the plot, especially the dialogue, this needs to be preserved from the original cycle in order to make the characters believable. May I suggest that you be more descriptive of the characters' surroundings and add more inner-monologue when appropriate? I love the concept of changeling and hope you cover more history about the origins of changelings themselves. I also wish to see more interaction between the dragons overall. I'm sorry if this came off the wrong way, I just want to help you. Good job, this quality of story-making takes imagination!

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