this is one of the best stories you've written in Action Man. I have a feeling Brandon and Rikki will become good friends... :)

Cool. Quickly sucked into the environment and everything outside of the story fades as soon as we are told how long it's been for Brandon since his last appearence. Again, a great short story.

I just read your story again, I liked it just as much as the first time. :)

hello. Not too bad a fic. The nice tints of detail throughout the story (chapter?) were just enough to paint an rough drawing in the mind. Good job for a short entry.

Short, but not like it needed to be longer. It's just fine the way it is.

I will never tire of reading your fic Ellen. :)

Two of the most underrated characters take the spotlight for a heart to heart. I LOVE it! The best part is that you kept them real. :)

Good stuff.