I had the opportunity to read this story in the Italian translation made by Cross, and I absolutely needed to came here and make to you my compliments for this. It is a very short piece, indeed, but it emotionated me so...

I'm a deep Grelliam fan, so the ending has been too much angst for me to bear D: But the feelings are expressed very well, especially Grell's exitation between his two sides of his heart, and the dialogues are excellent.

It's a very good job, indeed!

This one was so wonderful!

I'm keen on threesome (platonic threesome LOL) SebGrellWill in which Grell betrays Will, even if I get sad for poor Will...

Wonderfully written as always, I hope you'll write something like that again soon! Maybe a sequel... :P

I do love your Grell, I'm looking forward to reading something yours again!

OMG... It's short but I love it... well, poor Will, but I really love the Sebastian x Grell, you're doing an excellent job! :D

that was short, but i liked it :) cut to the chase, no fluff. although i feel sorry for Will in this one, i have to keep reminding myself that he didn't attack Grell this time! :P

TTTT poor Will, he is so sweet but he can't have Grell... I also feel guilty because I love SebbyxGrell and I love them being together, but I also love GrellxWill and I feel bad for him... But Sebas-chan is soo perfect! I understand Grell :p

Keep writing I love this kind of stories!

Hugs! 3

This is great! :D Good work, I feel really sorry for Will. I like how he was portrayed. XD Xxx

Yay new story to read! Can't wait for the next chapter it all looks so tasty at the moment!

Such a gorgeous, yet sad story. You've done a great job showing the love triangle here. I feel so sorry for Will in this story. That must be horrible, to actually know your significant other is cheating on you. I mean, it would be bad enough to find out, but to actually know, and still staying with the person while he/she is cheating has to hurt much more. It's sweet that Will still loves Grell despite the fact that Grell is cheating.

You did an excellent job with Sebastian in this story. For some reason I can see him doing this. The line where he says he doesn't like to share is very nice, shows just how much of a selfish jerk Sebastian is here.

Good work describing the amount of guilt Grell is feeling by the end. The fact that Sebastian is uncaring makes it even more powerful. Nice work with ending it with Grell about to confess everything, but not getting the chance. The unclear answer of whether or not Will ever finds out completes this tragic piece.

Wonderful work with this story.

D: Grell you bastard! How dare you do this to Will DX When he finds out, it's going to completely destroy him ;( And he's so sweet to you... DX Gah, I hope you get what you deserve, which is being ditched by both of them! Honestly, giving up a chance at love for a DEMON. ;( Poor Will...I'm waiting for some good angst! ;D