Awesome

loved the story. you make me wish that Jillian was a real character on the show (and that Sophia was still alive.)

Another great one! Scared the crap outta me when Hershel threw Jillian outta the loft!

Wheww that was a close call.

Ok at first I liked it and now it's kinda effed up. Majorly.

Really great story! I love how daryl rick and shane all seem to be on the same side in this story

PLEASE WRITE A SECOND STORY FOR THEM!

Love this story, great job:) I'm past this chapter (I'm on 14, I think) but I wanted to comment on the part you used from War of the Worlds, that works perfectly here:) I was like "no wayy" when I read it haha because I was wondering the whole chapter what the movie reference would be. Anyways, nice job!

First, I adore that you kept Daryl's dialect correct. It makes it so much easier to picture that pretty southern accent of his when the words are chopped.

Second, this was an amazing story with an amazing plot line and I am on my way to read the second installment and the third after that. Can't wait to see what you do next.

Third, your sex scenes were nicely balanced. Detail, but not over-detailed. You kept your focus on your plot and dialogue, but sprinkled in the hot juicy moments where they were needed. Excellent job.

Keep up the amazing work in the future in all of your works!

Great story. I am going to be reading the next parts of the story, as this one has gotten me very intrigued, I urge you to watch spelling and grammatical. I say you should go over your works once or twice before publishing anything. All in all very good and very intriguing. I love how you have foreshadowed several events with Deryl and Jillian. I see talent in you, I hope to see much more from you.

-Jacobey M. Thompson

Holy shit! I screamed when he saved her

Get him, daryl!

I love that song. I really liked this chapter. I just felt for daryl

Fucking merle.

Poor daryl

The eating scene was so funny!