Errie why havent you done more w/ this? it is a VERY intriguing begginning to a story i would LOVE to see more of! please please please tell me you wont ever update this fic! please tell me you havent abandoned it! - a very anxious WINTER,

I like it, but you can't leave it there. Could be a long tale, too, if it's J's life you're going to tell us about...

Death is the end and it is sad to see our friends die.

nice poetic start! moremoremoremore! (of cause j can refuse to die!) is it j/s? pleasepleasaeplease!