 Darklight-phoenix 4/3/12 . chapter 8This isn't anything to do with your story, but just someone wondering if your beta requests are open?...Do you do Harry Potter? |
 karol89 3/21/12 . chapter 1So...Are you planning to upload the last chapter anytime soon? )You left iús hanging her. Need to know what happened to Aragorn. |
 karol89 1/4/12 . chapter 8sorry for tle late review. busy week. i am praying for the best for aragorn, and that heather ends up in a great amount of pain for her betrayl. what a selfish hag.
update soon :) |
 gginsc 12/23/11 . chapter 8I hope Thistledown is really a wizard and Aragorn has been saved! That evil woman! I hope she is paid royally for her betrayal! |
 sogniamo 12/22/11 . chapter 1Is that the end of the story? Please tell me you're writing more! |
 sogniamo 12/22/11 . chapter 1Is that the end of the story? Please tell me you're writing more! |
 gginsc 12/12/11 . chapter 7I hope you have something "special" in store for this evil hag! After all Strider did for her! |
 karol89 12/12/11 . chapter 7wow. poor strider. I had to remind myself that he must have lived and gotten the ring back, to keep myself calm. What a horriable woman!
great job! don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapter! |
 karol89 12/11/11 . chapter 6This story is realy good! I love it. you have captured Aragorn's personality really well. But i cant read chapter 7. I don't know why. I have been trying for an hour, so i guess i will have to try later.
quick question: Is this based on the books or movies?
if books has he just met and fallen in love with Arwen, or is this even further ahead, after they got engaged? Sorry, but i didn't get a sense in what time this is taking place.
keep up the great job! |
 Estel 12/6/11 . chapter 6 Hmm, well, I'm looking forward to the next chapters.
At this point one could think that something terrible happened in Heather's past...
Though why didn't Aragorn bring her to his people? I mean without money, without connections, how did he expect her to survive? |
 gginsc 12/5/11 . chapter 6So this is to be his reward for helping this stupid woman! I have let her rot! |
 Estel 12/3/11 . chapter 5 Well, didn't see that coming:) I mean the kiss. Though I think it was more gratitude than love that led her to do this...
Looking forward to the next chapter... |
 Estel 11/29/11 . chapter 4 Oh, no, good that they defeated those wolves...
Great chapter, though hopefully they will have a bit luck form now on:) |
 gginsc 11/28/11 . chapter 4She is a bit nasty toward someone who saved her life. Hope she learns better soon. |
 Halcyon Impulsion 11/25/11 . chapter 3Good chapter. The only things I noticed were a few words...I think you mean a copse of trees not a corpse of trees :) Counsel for council, fare will be meager instead of fair.
Overall I loved the mood/tone set in this piece. I felt the cold and rain. And I love his knowledge of herbalism! |