... Bloody cotton candy?

Sure. Okay.

Nicely done! Very fluffy and angsty - just what I was looking for.

However, I'm prreeetty sure some of those bigger words don't mean what you think they mean. Example: Malodorous is generally not used to describe a rose. Unless you think roses smell bad, and a Sycophant is a suck-up, doesn't really suit Hohenheim. I know it was your placeholder name for what Ed usually calls him, but apostate and traitor might have worked better.

I was laughing with Alphones the whole time!

:O i've been searching for a story like this :') fluffy and with some dramaa 3

i love Ed :') and the story is short but i love it :)

AWESOME! u rock

You. Are. Amazing. Brilliant. Fantastic. Fabulous. Astounding. Extraordinary. Incredible. Awe-inspiring. Fantastical. Fantabulous. Inspirational. Exceptional. Epic. Uh... *looks in thesaurus* Just...words cannot describe how much this story moved me. (I'm corny XD) Possibly the BEST Fullmetal Alchemist fan fiction I have ever read.

Hugs n' narwhals,

KawaiiMarshmallow