:'( Oh my god...I cried as I read this!

This is so beautifully written! D'X I don't really like William here...but tha's his personality, so there's not much I can do.

Anyway, great job! :D

All I really have to say is...wow.

This story was so incredibly touching, and I know of very few other stories that actually made me cry! Your writing was smooth and eloquent, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.

Well done!

Perfect, no other word can describe this. From the fight, to the flashbacks, to Alan's near emotional-breakdowns, it's all executed with perfection. The pacing is wonderful, everyone's in character, and it seems almost as if it could actually be cannon. My heart cracked more and more with every flashback, because I had to be reminded that they were just memories.

Eric was perfectly protective, I wanted to punch Will and Sebastian in their faces, Alan made my heart crack, and this whole thing just made me cry. All the flashbacks were perfectly written, and the best thing I've ever read to describing the two in the early stages of their relationship. It felt real; not too romantic, and not too sudden.

Will angered me to no extent here, because he just couldn't let poor Alan go, when it was clear he would be better off just sleeping, grieving, and staying away from everyone. His disbelief that they were dating, and his questions to confirm that Eric was a 'willing participant' in the relationship just made me want to scream.

And the ending; oh my God, then ending. Alan, broken, beaten, and unsure of what will happen next, finds that one little note from Eric, as if he was telling him to just keep going, for him, because he loved him. Six simple words made me bawl and smile all at the same time.

I say it once again; perfect. Thank you for writing this exquisite story.

TT-TT I can't believe it... IM CRYING! I love this... So sad!

I actually cried. :C

So, so sad. I also thought what you did at the end of the musical-it was probably a good thing that Alan went first. Eric seems like he'd be better able to deal with death. ...Of course, he died too, so... but whatever.

This fic reminds me a little of one I found on dA, by Hopie-Cat. I think it's called "Seven Days" but I'm not sure.

Anyway, great job. :)

I would have to agree with you Alan and Eric are a vry cute and a very good couple . Yea it was sad that Alan died but this story just put a twist to it were Eric died instead :/ still sad but it shows Alan point of view of Eric dying instead of him.

Anyways good work :D

I do not understand why this only has a couple of reviews!

I loved everything. I can't really say anything about it other than this...

I cried.

Great work!

DMK

I prefer so much your ending! Your story is so sad but you describe so well all theirs feelings! Good work!

I'm crying. Again.

It's even more beautiful when read as a whole. I have no words other than that. You've mastered Eric and Alan now, no doubt about it.

First review! :D

To break the serious:

Is it Sutcliff?