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Guest 12/23/12 . chapter 1 thank you Taylor Hillrdge meet some guy dating James Petitious message Ridgeway High School |
KlarizaClaytonFan 8/7/12 . chapter 7Hi! This was brilliant! I enjoyed the story thanks, I hope you enjoyed writing it! What book are you working on? Great job! |
I'mADinosaurRawrr 2/6/12 . chapter 5Ohmygosh , they got out ! I hope Scott & Taylor get together in the end & Taylor & Samantha become best friendss again . Can't wait for the next chapter ! |
I'mADinosaurRawrr 1/18/12 . chapter 4Ohhhmyygoshhhh! That was great , & I love the Haley idea . Continuee(: |
Flaming Moth 1/5/12 . chapter 3You left it on a cliffhanger of sorts? Well, that's always a good way to keep the reader coming back for more. I like how you prolonged the kidnapping and the reasons for Jeremy making them clean up the house. And the little twist with Eric stowing away to help save his sister was just brilliant. I wasn't expecting that at all. I look forward to reading the next chapter in this awesome story! |
I'mADinosaurRawrr 12/21/11 . chapter 3Lovedddd It ; Pleaseee Continueee(: |
I'mADinosaurRawrr 12/1/11 . chapter 2OMG ! Pleasee continueee . This is great , ooh and can you keep them kidnapped for a while , just to add more drama. Ooh and Scott and the dad show up . I think Taylor/Scott make a cute couple. Pleasee continuee , it looks awesome and there's not alot of stories for Cyberbully(: |
Flaming Moth 11/15/11 . chapter 2And the suspense continues! At first, I really thought you were going to have Jeremy rape Taylor. I think I sighed with relief alongside her. And since Jeremy IS a big guy, I think it'd be more practical to have Scott and Taylor's father both show up, whether it be together or them coming in at different times. Heck, maybe you could even use one to distract Jeremy while the other gets him from behind. But that's just me. You're the author after all. ;) Keep it up! Looking forward to more. |
Flaming Moth 11/13/11 . chapter 1So it looks like this is going to be a multi-chapter story, am I right? It sounds like a pretty interesting concept. I'm curious as to what types of plans James has in store for the girls. I'm a sucker for angst and drama in a story, especially if it ends on a happy note. Keep it up! I look forward to reading more. |