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Reviews for: Bulletproof Vests and Sweatpants
Sules 2/4/12 . chapter 1
I just love it :) Makes me smile how Jules was furious at Sam :) great job!
Hazmatt 11/27/11 . chapter 1
Great story! I enjoyed it!
Infame 11/16/11 . chapter 1
I absolutely loved this! It was beautifully written and completely adorable :)
Tinkerpanda 11/15/11 . chapter 1
Jules insecurity and her jealousy were amazing! I enjoyed her shortness and Sam's initial confusion. I was smiling the whole way through - very humorous but I still found the characters and the interactions totally believable. Thoroughly enjoyed this. I love the dialogue, the descriptions. Hell I just love your style.

More soon, s'il vous plait.
Kittykat 11/15/11 . chapter 1
your time of the - LOL! great plot please add more chapters.
dixs 11/15/11 . chapter 1
Love it. you should do a Jules PMSing on Sam fic that would be funny...
rgs38 11/14/11 . chapter 1
Love this, even if it is fluff. :) I'm kind of an angst fan but I do quite love the idea of Jules being jealous, I don't know, it's not really a role we see as much since we actually saw Steve and Jules together, don't get to flip that idea around much. Love the little unspoken things in the beginning also about the sounds of the pot and the tension in the air, love it. Nice work even though you're a little out of your element, you can't tell! Can't wait to see some updates, glad you're still writing and still here!
iheartflashpoint 11/13/11 . chapter 1
Ahhh I loved this!

You know.. you really should write more fluff, it brings out your soft side (no pun intended)...

okay yeah the pun kinda works there but you catch my drift... still, this was great- thanks for the nice one-shot :D
SYuuri 11/13/11 . chapter 1
Ohmygod. I freakin loved this, like loved to the max. I don't even know which part I liked the most because I enjoyed reading it from your first AN to your last AN.

First, I want to see Sam in that dress shirt. Second, I want to see Sam without any shirts.

I was glad that you brought up Steve. Great, wasn't it, since you don't like him :D I'm still convinced I hate Raina more than you do him. I also liked how you addressed Jules' insecurities, cos Raina -is- younger than her.. so perky and bubbly and just meh in general.

I loved this. So much so! Thank you for writing it!
Young at Heart21 11/13/11 . chapter 1
Great job! I really enjoyed this one.
oldtvlover 11/13/11 . chapter 1
Wonderful job (as usual)! I enjoyed this!
Justicerocks 11/13/11 . chapter 1
I loved this! I could see this happening.
Delysia 11/13/11 . chapter 1
Okay I don't know why the email gods hate me but I found this with a million other notices in my spam folder. I think it's just yours and two other authors so I am at a complete lost. In fact I was just about to look up what the heck happened to you. Anyway lots of happy reading tonight...

As for this story- Want to punch Raina's freaking face in! You do not flirt when you are dying and you do not flirt with Sam. Flirt with the bomber or Steve or Raf but not Sam. I sort of wished Jules had knocked her out.

I love this story. The symbolism with his shirt and how comfortable they have grown actually making her uncomfortable was perfect. Jules is clearly unsure where the line is about being a couple, being close and comfortable, and being boring and losing yourself in someone else. It seems like a genuine fear she would have, not close to anyone, fiercely independent. Where as Sam because of his father, seems the opposite- all he wants is to have someone he can be so connected with. They are so perfectly ying and yang.

There was a lot of really strong visual moments, the pot in another country, the dented sink, the door hitting her wall, the tragedy that has be fallen all non gray sweats (and I can speak from experience those tomato sauce stains are a bitch, I am still mourning the loss of a pale blue top I loved to that particular calamity).

Loved the super fluffy end and would gush more but I have like a bunch of your stuff to catch up on and then I need to figure out what the hell happened to my email. Grumble, grumble.

Delysia
Stellagirl1993 11/13/11 . chapter 1
*explode of happiness* Seriously, this was beyond cute and adorable and I loved it very very much! :3

I've been a loyal reader since DT and now following DA,DT but I never reviewed/had the time :/

I do want to tell you that I simply love your fics and that you're one of the best flashpoint fanfic writers out there!:3
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