Alright Hols, no more playing around - you tell me who the mother is and you tell me right now!

Great chapter - glad Maura was okay but seriously - tell me!

Can't wait for the update. :):)

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Hiya,

This was a really interesting chapter.

I quite liked it. You have given us some clues and background info which is awesome, but have left us more clues for the future chapters which is also awesome.

Thanks for updating.

Cheers A

Oh God it's all going down in this chapter! So two of our potential mothers are pregnant, does this mean that Andrea will make a confession of her own soon?

Was Maura lying the whole time? Was she on the Pill and covering it up? I can imagine why she would if it's what I think!

Loved it Hollie, and you're forgiven for the time lapse...I completely understand!

Jess xx

Hi Hol, it's me again via my other account.

I would just like to say that I am so sorry for my silliness, my immature attitude and of course, for annoying you the wya I did. I'm really sorry for jumping to conclusions - it's your story, do what you like with it. So let me just re-review:

Oh no! Poor Maura! But how did she manage to fall pregnant? Well whatever the answer is, I hope she'll be alright and the baby.

Oooohhh, has Kerry let a little too much slip? Is her dead daughter the baby in the park?

YOu just keep throwing up so many twists and it's BRILLIANT! Lol

Keep up the good work Hols! :);)

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Good God Hollie you sure know how to build the suspense!

So Kerry's pregnant and Maura's pregnant. Andrea's gone mental. And Maura's half dead. And you say my stories are bad for things like this!

I must say I did chuckle at your description of Gina and Smithy, very accurate!

MORE NOW PLEASE!

Jess xx

wow, this chapter was amazing. I really liked it. Thanks for the update, I want to say more about it, but I am exhausted and can't at the moment. Sorry, will do tomorrow.

Thanks again for the update. Cheers A

Oh no! Poor Maura! Please let her be okay!

And would you look at that - both the remaining suspects are pregnant... is Kerry's dead baby the one in the park?

And I knew you were going to do that Hols, what is wrong with you? Kerry and Cameron? They were a terrible couple! And don't get emotional about this; I'm only giving you negative feedback because you've made a big mistake... and I'm feeling confident that another pairing is going to happen...

But anyway, good chapter and in the words of Harry Hill... WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

So much drama! I love it!

Best chapter so far, it was action filled and revealed a lot of the characters pasts. I absolutely adored Andrea's back story and my heart was aching for her.

So is Kerry the one? Or is there something else going on?

Loved it Hols!

Jess xx

Uh-oh... have we found the mother? Is it really Kerry?

Aaww poor Andrea; that's so sad about her partner and her baby, will she ever get her baby back? :(

And what's the deal with this Vincent guy? :S

Great work again Hols, keep it up! ;)

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Oh wow, this was a really interesting and good chapter. So much awesomeness and yet sadness. Oh Andrea and Kerry. Thanks for the update. This story really is awesome. Cheers A

Hiya,

Thanks for the update. I am sorry that it has taken me so long to review, I literally just moved to Canada from Australia, so have been a tad busy packing, organising, moving and then unpacking.

This was a really good chapter. I quite enjoyed it. It was very well written, thankyou for the update. I am liking this story, my suspicions are with Kerry at the moment.

Thanks again.

Cheers A

You're presenting a good case for all the different officers but it remains to be seen which one it is...although I'm convinced you're just leading us all on ;)

Can't wait to see what else is revealed!

Loved it,

Jess xx

Oh... have they really found the mother? Is it really Andrea? Or have they just eliminated a possible suspect from their enquiries?

Oh this is getting so exciting! Please update soon! :):)

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Oh my gosh I loved this chapter, best one yet! For some reason I think you're leaving red herrings and making it sound like it could be Andrea who's the mother...I'm so suspicious of you haha

Or could it be Maura? Or could it be Kerry? Or could it be someone we don't even know yet?

The suspense it killing me!

More!

Jess xx

Aaww poor Andrea! :(

Oh boy! So three women - one can't have kids and two have been pregnant before... but who is the mother of the baby in the park?

Oooohhh please keep going Hols; this is really getting exciting!

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