Catherder, I see the "brave" M/A fans coming out to tell you what terrible a person you are. You are at least brave enough to sign your reviews. I'ts no suprise that they can't sign their review since they have nothing interesting or intellegent to say. It's very easy to call names when you're hiding.

BTW I think I have review before but needless to say I like the poem.

Interesting. Nice character peice.

Wonderful stuff! Love that "Max" refrain type repeats that later on got hanged with "Alec". Great !

I love it...it actually makes Romeo and Juliet an interesting read ;) Okay, because you've reminded me of English class, you get a "whole" review:

Very effective set up of the text.
The repetition of some basic concepts (but I had Max) really drive it all home.
The comparison of M/L to J/R is subtle and extremely well done.
"Max was there, but no longer by my side." Wow! Alienatoin wile still having physical presence


and that's a "whole" review love it, think I'll probably read it again and again, and so on:) Keep up the good work

Very, very nice. I loved the summation at the end, a dramatic antithesis of the beginning. Very heart wrenching words. It breaks my heart when he says she ran again - to Terminal City - to Alec. My poor Logan! Exceptional job Catherder!

It's true that piece by piece his life has been stripped away. Is all that's left fortune's fool? Maybe just maybe, now that all the trappings have been peeled away we will see the true Logan. Very touching.

This is really nice. The only thing that has been holding Logan together all this time is Max, and now she's gone, who's to say what will happen. I love this treatment... more please!!

I really like this. It shows how, piece by piece, Logan's life is falling apart, and the one person who used to be his constant is now falling away as well. I hope things improve on that front.

Interesting how you use Romeo's words at the time when his life is also falling apart. At least he still has Juliet at that stage, which make Logan's thoughts here all the more poignant. Like how you build to the feeling of ultimate loss you have him expresses at her betrayal - he is truely feeling "wedded to calamity."

that was really cool...sad...:(...we want max and logan max and logan max and....ok i'll shut up now

Sad piece.

This is really good. I'm usually not a fan of angst, but I like this. ^_~