I think the writing was good but I shouldn't read this because it makes me dislike Nami. I used to love her but when she says she the queen, I was like "Nope" I don't know. You are indeed a VERY good writer no doubt. And I don't ship Nami x Sanji or Nami x Zoro so I have no idea why I'm here. Sorry.

I was a bit unsure about reading this to be honest. Nami isn't exactly my favourite character but I figured I should at least give new things a go. I'm glad that I did. Nami's character in this was great, I really enjoyed seeing her be manipulative to get Zoro and Sanji together. Also for a first at explicit hardcore m/f this was wonderful, it didn't show in the writing at all.

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my head exploded. that was the most incredible and well-written threesome on the whole internet. holy shit. and it had so much subtle and quiet emotion too. so lovely! and amazing! and holy shit!

wow. for reals. you are such a great writer, it kills me (in the best way possible). I am so happy you exist!

holy shit

woah. just woah.
I'll be honest; I was sceptical at first, since I've mostly read yaoi until this.
But - I'm speechless.
I worship thee, StarkB!

Oh God , I feel like I'm an old dirty pervert reading this ! I had doubts reading a threesome story at first but wow , that was really really hot and sweet at the same time ! I read it two times in a row teehee. I'm wondering what they were whisperring to one another . Anyway , There is just one thing to say after such a story ; MORE please!

This was amazing and so very hot hot hot! The descriptions were beautiful I really enjoyed reading this.

wow. That was extremely well done, and you kept to their characters almost perfectly. I've alway preferred SanjiNami, but this fic officially squirmed Zoro in there.

This story was amazing! I never could have thought of a scenario like that, and the way you wrote it was also amazing! This story was so hot! Please continue with these awesome stories! (especially ZoroxSan)

Nami always gets what she wants in the end. XP

This fic reminded me of a fic I read a loooooong time ago in the Samurai Champloo fandom. I think it was called In Between and had Fuu, Mugen and Jin in a situation like this. Except there was no sex, it was just sweet

Anyway. I really enjoyed that. I honesly thought that it would be awkward and kinda gross, but pleasantly, it wasn't bad at all. It was sweet and had me awwwing and fangirling over the situation. Soo... good job!

Oh...wow...!

Nami practically got the best place on earth, she is, where many of us are still only can DREAM about to be! Lucky woman! XD

WOnderful writing as always. Like your threesome *thumbs up* great!

Wish you all good!

Love

Pernille

This may contradict what others say but this story is not one of your best StarkBlack. You usually write with, in my opinion, more passion and depth for the characters. This seems like some bad porn set up in Amsterdam.

I wouldn't normally leave a comment like this but I know you can write so much better then this.

Hahaha Loved this! You should make a sequel!

This is so, oh man this is gonna be hard, I'm so speechless. My favorite writer and artist collaborating this beautiful story. It's gorgeous I love this threesome and it's a shame I don't see it more because the aspects of it are just unbelievable.

The situation and the way you equally harmonized all three of them working together and loving one another. And your sex scenes are always mind blowing but the way you ended too almost made me break into some tears. You two should do this more often so I can keep grinning in perfection. 3