| Reviews for Against Time |
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julesjumper 5/1/13 . chapter 17Ahhh, what are you doing to me?! It's great that you uploaded a new chapter but now I'm going to check everyday if there isn't the next one...:) I actually didn't have the time to read the new chap but the summary in the beginning is amazing. It's not that easy to remember all the details. Anyway, thanks a bunch for the update! :) |
BeautifulMemoryS 2/16/13 . chapter 16It's been a while since you updated but I really hope you'll be continuing this story. Pretty please? :) Anyway, good luck with school haha. x |
RoadwayFox 1/16/13 . chapter 16you really have to finish the story! they finally started to form the bond...it's soo sweet! you just can't stop here! ) |
julesjumper 11/23/12 . chapter 16I'm always so happy when you upload! It was a great chapter! I really like the story line so far, so keep the good work up! |
misslancaster 10/15/12 . chapter 15This is a truly amazing story. The plot is suspenseful - I literally clutched my heart when I read that it was Will Salas in the grey coat, I need to find out what happens! - and the characterization of all the characters is amazing! I love Ryzea, your OC really fit in well with the story and I congratulate you for that. And of course, your portrayal of Raymond Leon is amazing as well. Who wouldn't want those icy blue eyes looking into their soul? ANYWAY, brilliant story. Please update soon, I understand it when writer's block is a pain in the ass and also-ahem-us writers can get a bit out of it, but this is an amazing story that needs to continue! |
iamroyaltea 10/9/12 . chapter 15 I loved the 15th chap! Gosh, I know the storyline is the main focus here, but I can't help but squeal when Raymond and Washlington do all this fluffy stuff. Makes my palms itch and heart flutter. |
julesjumper 8/15/12 . chapter 15I've read this story for quite some time now and I'm so happy about every update! It is such a good story and the last chapter was really brilliant. I also love your style of writing! Keep the good work up! I'm looking forward the next update. |
HowlynMad 8/10/12 . chapter 14 And an evil cliffie... now you are required by law to continue. In case you didn't know the cliffie law... |
HowlynMad 8/10/12 . chapter 12 Hmm, perhaps too late to comment but I guess the only thing that I might note that I would like to see is a little more character development of Leon. I know you're setting a tone to his character but he just seems cold and little else. I certainly, plz plz, don't misunderstand, arent asking you to make him in anyway ooc (I love stories best that stay IC) but I'm just feeling a little empty about his character at this point. Beyond that, I'm really into the story. Good fic for this little fandom is rare please DO continue. I, for one, will be here to read. |
HowlynMad 8/9/12 . chapter 8 Yeah, new chapters. I haven't been as diligent as I should. |
hehe 8/8/12 . chapter 14 This is such a good story! I can't believe that Ian died... The chapters are sort of short but I'll manage. Write more, please?. |
imposter17 8/4/12 . chapter 13Oops... Just hit the button. As I was saying, if you don't continue with this story then I implore you to continue the great writing in other areas! :D good luck |
imposter17 8/4/12 . chapter 14I'm sorry you're loosing inspiration, but if you do keep going with this I would live to keep reading! It's a very interesting story, and I really want to learn more about Zea and how her character develops! If not, then I im |
Nephele.Paints.The.Rain 7/23/12 . chapter 14O_O creep. anyway it's good to see that somebody is actually trying to write a good story about Ray. It honesty suprises me that no one has taken interest in such an interesting (and handsome) character. I like how you rut your own plot along with the canon. I want more action here! you are killing me! xD and what's up with Ray and Connie have they slept together? and you just HAD to kill Ian! I was starting to like him... :( . PS DON'T YOU DARE KILL HIM IN THE END! I'm anxiously awaiting for the next chapter! |
Ecote123 7/16/12 . chapter 14 Continue with your story. Please, it's amazing and definitely deserves more reviews. So here's one more. Again, please continue. |