Very good. I liked it. Yes, they do have quite a number of things to work out. I can't wait to read the next chapter

Love the relationship :)

Oh wow, now that was an emotional chapter, a lot of mislaid hurt and guilt but i'm glad they are starting to resolve their issues and connect more now.

I totally adore the idea of your story. It's

nice to see, that carlisle and esme aren't the perfect

parents..

are you going to write a spanking-story about bella and

carlisle too? please!

maybe jake and nessie, too, if you want ;)

As always, I am enjoying your stories. Keep up the good work :)

Good chapter. I loved the interaction between Carlisle and Esme. I also loved the interaciton between Rosalie and Edward. Please continue this story.

Well once again it was amazing

I love the Esme Carlisle conversation It was good I really did feel and understand they conflict that they felt... once again I felt as though I was thrust into the land of Twilight... and I am really living and experiencing what they are... a-m-a-z-i-n-g :)

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I think she's in trouble...in more ways than one. :)

aww soo sad. plzz update soon

Aw poor Edward getting bitten and he was just trying to make her see sense. I know Carlisle has given Rose her last warning and he's bound to not be happy with physical harm to any family member. Rose had better put a thick phonebook down her panties lol

Great writing and I like the pace.I can never get that right with my stories; keep it up :D

Yes, poor Edward. Well, I think you did a good job showing the conversation between Esme and Carlisle. I can't wait to read the next chapter

awesome story update ASAP

Good chapter! I'm glad that you showed some of the u securities that this family has... But good grief don't they know after a year and a half that one has to let Rosalie cool down before you try to make her see reason? Carlisle, sometimes, isn't very smart... Lol. Edward is never very smart, so I imagine he probably never really learns. Lol.

Poor Esme though, I mean... Carlisle guilted her... Sigh... I can't help but be on her side.. She and Rosalie are my favorites. )

Again, fantastic chapter!

Another great chapter. There was alot of impact with everyones emotions running so high. I was surprised by Edward though trying to talk her out of running away. I didn't think that would be something he would do only because theirs was always a volatile relationship. Anyway the story is going well and you are still an awesome writer. Can't wait for the next installment when Carlisle realizes he has to do something to get the situation under control. Hmm, will Esme be mothering both kids after this turn of events? Thanks for posting.