Reviews for The Beginning of the End

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Robert Enders 2004-04-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou went from Stephen planning a date with her to the wedding. And your paragraph on the wedding was a little too concise. Life altering events usually need more than two lines of text to discribe. Other than that it is pretty good. I have never read Harry Potter, but I still liked how you discribed his thought process. The MLA should adopt your way of puntuating thought processes of characters as the standard.
nekohebi 2003-06-23 ch 2,	abuseUPDATE! NOW! please (",)
hasapi 2003-06-22 ch 26, anon.	abuseCan't remember whether I reviewed this already... And though I usually do NOT do this, I would like to know whether you're planning on continuing? And if you're not, please at least explain to me the remainder of the plot? Please? pouts Okay, I'm being childish. I don't know why. Just finished the fifth book... You know how it is...
nekohebi 2003-06-19 ch 1, anon.	abusehi! please, please, please continue with this story! i want to know what happens! and when's the various romances gonna kick in? please update soon sobs in dispair :-(
nekohebi 2003-06-14 ch 26, anon.	abusestill love it! POST THE NEXT CHAPTER! i wanna know what happens! bursts into tears
nekohebi 2003-04-26 ch 1,	abuseplease please please update soon! i love this story and want to know what is going to happen!
nekohebi 2003-02-12 ch 26,	abusecool! yay! sorry, i read this chapter ages ago but forgot to review it! i'm soooo forgetful!!! i still love it!!!!!!!! and i can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ~ nekohebi
brighteyes0621 2003-02-08 ch 26,	abuse poor Hagrid. Harry made him cry. Bad Harry!! :D Well at least he feels bad about it now. I sure hope he works out his demons soon. I like the story very much!!! It is definitely taking shape and has me very very curious. I can't wait for the next chapter!!
brighteyes0621 2003-02-08 ch 24,	abusehmmmm...curiouser and curioser. Whats happening to the garden gnomes? And what happened to the twins when they went for the jars? I guess I will wait and see what happens.
brighteyes0621 2003-02-08 ch 21,	abuse Geez...you should have a warning...DO NOT DRINK WHILE READING THIS. it was so funny!!!
brighteyes0621 2003-02-08 ch 19,	abuseSorry...it's me again. I just can't resist pestering..erm I mean reviewing! Please please don't be thinking of killing Albus off! I love Albus!! Glances over and reviews chapter...hmmm mentions how weak Albus is..no it's not true...he is just old and a little weak. But still has many many years left..right??? Oh and please don't let Harry go dark. Is Severus going to help him resolve his issues. Eeeeks the suspense is killing me. Oh and sharing power with Cat..hehehehe Severus is just going to love that. Sorry and one more question...I thought somewhere in the story it mentioned that Cat does have some magical ability she just doesn't realize it yet. Oh my gosh...I must be imagining things and going crazy . Alright, I will shut up now and finish reading.
brighteyes0621 2003-02-08 ch 17,	abuseoohh...shame on Minerva. No child is worth giving up on. By the way, I like this Snape. And I can see where Snape would worry about Harry. Repressing things can be very dangerous, and his right. Harry is just a child!! There rant over now
brighteyes0621 2003-02-08 ch 15,	abuse Oh gods that was funny. hehe I can just imagine timid Nevilled standing there questioning Snape. And...and imagine the look on Snapes face!! Charley
nekohebi 2003-02-05 ch 25,	abuseCOOL! is still hilarious! i know what you mean about writing chapters out of order, i do it ALL the time! ~ nekohebi
mell8 2003-02-01 ch 22,	abuseWow. That is very good. I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up with your writing.

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