Loved this one!

Awesome story! Loved the sweet ending. :)

Loved it :)

:D Aw! That was awesome, such a sweet ending. I loved it!

Cute!

Aw, now that's a sweet take on Admiral McGee and kind of funny when I think about him being the son of Penny. Makes perfect sense he would have that "cops are pigs" mentality! My only teeny tiny question is whether the guy's name is Brennan or Gerrit, both were used but obvious was the same guy so not confusing.

Love the story!

Awwwwwwww! D

I liked this take on Tim's family. I know that it's from the show but this really works well.

Hmmm great story. Gave me an idea for what I have running around my head :) nothing directly from the story but I've been wanting to write a story based off the episode. Great job