hi there, just finished reading your rainbow brite fanfiction shadows of the past

let me tell you i liked it a lot, almost felt as if it was part of the show

it kinda disoriented me how you worked with some of the stuff but it was pretty good!

Excellent story! It was very interesting how you made your interpetation of the cartoon into the world of Rainbow Brite. I hope you do more.

A rainbow nebula. Now that would be a sight to see.

Uh-oh eyes. It must be that king of darkness, or whatever the heck his name is.

I can't wait to see their reaction to five of the others being captured.

Interesting. How long do these color kids (for lack of a better term) live annyway?

I just looked up that krys character. The way he uses that Prism kinda reminds me of Mega Man.

Hmm, I like the story. I can't make any commentary on the characters, but I can still say that the writing is great.

I must admit, I know very little about Rainbow Brite (I've only seen a grand total of about 15 minutes); nevertheless, I really liked your Kim Possible stories, especially "In a Blaze of Green Glory", so I figured, "Eh why not." I must say, setting my lack of knowledge, and subsequent web searches aside; I really like what I've read so far.

Next chapter.

S'good.

I watched the show when i was about 6 or 7 for about a year, and then lost it as my interests changed. I must say i'm quite glad that there are still people writing stories like this. this was very well written and i enjoyed reading it.

Good start :D

I really wish I culd have seen something like this come into existance in the Show. I loved it when I was little, and Hey! I still do! Thanks a lot for bringing back some good old memories with this beautiful piece of work, along with it's two companion books, Lights of the Present and Rainbows of the Future.

Please keep writing stories I love them!

That was sooooo good! I really think that if they *did* start making new Rainbow Brite episodes, you'd write great ones. Keep up the good work. _