Reviews for Never Spellbound by a Starry Sky

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PearlOfTheSouthSeas 2008-03-11 ch 14,	abuseBetter late than never, right? :) Yes, it's me again, 4 and a half years after you finished this story. But I still felt obliged to telling you how much I loved it. You write so fantastically well and I absolutely love the humor in your stories. I also marvel at how well you can describe things from a woman's POV and than right in the next chapter switch to the man's perspective. Really great and absolutely believable and true to the characters. Are you still writing (Mummy) fanfiction? I'd love to read more stuff written by you! :) Pearl
Luling 2007-10-21 ch 14, anon.	abuseAww, poor Jonathan xD
Trinity 2007-10-21 ch 10, anon.	abuseHaha, I KNEW you were too good of a writer to let them off the hook just like that =D Kudos to your brilliant writing!!
Trinity 2007-10-21 ch 6, anon.	abuseHahaha! I love how all your stories are connected together!! Your allusion to Evelyn's Arabic ("What are they after?" whispered Evelyn, whose Arabic was limited primarily to 'I am sorry for the mess I have made of your shop'.) was pricless =D It gave me a goofy smile for a long time!
Trinity 2007-10-21 ch 3, anon.	abuseAww! Rick really was incredibly dashing in this one! ^^
bloodredcherry 2006-08-05 ch 2,	abuseHehe, I love your stories my dear! They are highly amusing, and you have the characters down brilliantly. I know this by reading the second chapter! :D
Lucky Fannah 2005-08-26 ch 14,	abuseaka jonnycarnahan aka Sheri Hello! It's been quite a while since you wrote this wonderful story, and I was wondering if anymore Mummy fiction might be in your future? You are extremely talented and I adore how you write Jonathan as well as Jonathan and Evie ... their relationship as siblings is the best in the fandom! Hugs! Sheri
dress-without-sleeves 2005-04-30 ch 14,	abuseOnce upon a time, there was a very beautiful girl named Molly. Molly was absolutely perfect in every way imaginable, and everyone loved her. Now, one day, Molly was off being a Mummy junkie, as she was prone to be, and she stumbled across a HORRIFIC story. Luckily, it wasn't this one. Later, she came across THIS story, and fell in love. After much convincing, the story agreed to marry her. And they were very happy. They had four little ficlet children named The Distance, Coming Clean, Sweet As This, and Surrender. Savvy? ( And don't I sound cool, using that word? I think I do. Oh, yes,)
Nakhti (again- run for the ... 2003-12-17 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey Eve, I just thought i'd let you know that, inspired by your story, i am reading 'Crocodile on the Sandbank'- and i love it! i heartily thank you for the recommendation, which i have passed on to my Egyptology student housemate, and she loves it too! Its really amusing to suddenly happen upon one of your chapter titles in the narrative as well! Im re-reading your story afterwards, and i will probably print it out and give that to my housemate too! you just have to write more, either an update of deja vous (tap tap tap, im WAITING!! heehee) or another story altogether. I just LOVE your writing!! Nakhti
A. Windsor 2003-09-26 ch 14,	abusei'm speechless by how adorable and honest and beautiful this story is! I could just feel the happiness! You are simply an amazing writer. You perfectly characterize all of our favorite characters! Great job!
I Need A Creative Penname 2003-08-05 ch 14,	abusehappy sigh Having just reread the entire story once more, I have to leave a random review. I absolutely love NSBASS! It makes me crack up one minute and then get teary eyed the next. You nailed Rick and Evy's personalities so well, its quite amazing. I have the whole thing printed out and have read scenes over and over again; they still have the same effects on me as they did the first time I read them. Your writing is fantastic. Any thoughts of a sequel? Your devoted reader and obsessed fan, Mollie
Nakhti 2003-08-04 ch 13,	abuseIt was as though I'd jumped from a precipice, expecting to fall, hoping Rick would be there to catch me... only to discover I could fly. my god youre good at this writing malarky. now that i have my serious literary critics cap on gets cap from bottom of wardrobe i can tell you that your use of similes and descriptive phrases is frickin amazing!i direct your attention to; exploring the wonders of God's architecture. what a beautiful phrase! if i ever get one tenth of the way towards this good, i will gladly have it carved on my tombstone "here lieth Nakhti, one tenth as good as Eve, and bloody chuffed with it" the hem of my white gown peeping reproachfully out at me. "D'you think I should get a new dress?" I asked. hahaha! evy is worried about being a brazen hypocritical hussy in her wedding dress! she could just wear a red poppy, and some really bright red lipstick, and some red rouge, and perhaps a red garter...red crotchless knickers... The last time I'd seen my brother, he was hiding away in his own bedroom with cotton batting stuffed in his ears, playing Solitaire and drinking himself into an amiable stupor. thats my trick! well, playing solitaire on the computer (actually i ardently defend the right to refer to it as Patience) the cotton woll is useful, especially when your housemates just dont get the hint about the walls being really thin! there are certain sounds it just isnt right to subject another human being to... "With my body... I thee... worship... okay, sounds like a plan." sounds like a plan...but with the wrong woman! would you kindly give him directions to my house please? Rick looked completely mystified. "If it wasn't important, who cares whether I was listening or not?" so he's bought the cow and now he's back to good old chauvenistic manly behaviour, huh? bloody typical! ok, forgiven- he WAS listening. makes a change- usually men have selective hearing and can only listen to one particular type of conversation- sports commentaries! "No food, no nookie." why not both at once? doesnt that sound like fun? i like charlie sheens take on the whole food fetish thing in Hot shots, where he fries bacon on her stomach! oh, i cant believe theres only one more chapter! i dont want it to end! cant you write some more, just for me? no, then you'd have to be subjected to more of my inane reviews, and thats just masochism. pathetic whining noise humph!
Nakhti 2003-08-04 ch 12,	abuseSimple gets boring real quick, and I don't deal well with boring. I'm not saying I want to be drugged and burglarized and see my girl get smacked around, or have to deal with walking dead guys if they didnt would we give a rats arse for them anyway? we want to see all of the above and in glorious technicolor and slow motion to boot! and he damn well knows it! movie stars, eh? tut tut "I'm tired of hauling Carnahans around. I'm not a damn delivery service." i wish he WAS a delivery service- well, more of a gorilla-gramme service actually. y'know, when they dress up as gorillas and then come to your house and strip naked? did i dream that somewhere? All right, so I'm no good at mushy scenes. Especially with other guys, I mean, jeez. im ecstatically happy to hear that! the last thing i wanna see is a rick/jonathan pairing! thats not what you meant by offending scenes between consenting adults, is it? if so, im off! "And you use that filthy mouth to kiss my baby sister." Yep, I thought. Every day of her life, if she'll let me. ok, reassured now. gee, ricks such a stud muffin, i dont know what i was thinking about! "No, I mean..." she tugged at my hand, and crooked a finger at me in the universal come-hither gesture. "Stop... talking." wow, i love the way you describe this! its so cute and playful and really, really saucy! i have a feeling the 'sheer carnality' bit i was keeping my fingers crossed for is coming up...yup yup yup. I broke contact just long enough to peel the blankets back, and to quickly shed my boots. aw, shes obviously THE ONE because he's finally decided to take his boots off when he gets a shag! yay! true love... evelyn a biter? wow, steady on there, she might have rabies!wild girl! and yes, rick does indeed like it rough, doesnt he? i knew that about him all along Well, I knew I didn't have anything to be embarrassed about, dead pan expression of seriousness id say not- the guy is BUILT! disolves into giggles bet he's HUNG too! smirks salaciously as she spoke an entirely new language I somehow managed to understand. ok, shes speaking in tongues?! wow, he IS good! "No, no. Shouting is good." In fact, remembering how she'd yelled out made me want her again. There was so much more I wanted to show her--and I was sure she could probably teach me a few new tricks. laughing too hard to comment That was it. I was ready to go right then and there. bloody hell! he's a machine! usually it takes at least half an hour, but this guy is just...well...every girls dream! ok, bonus authors notes- i love it! if i hadnt already put it on my favourite stories list i would right now. but i have, so i cant stamps foot for some way to show appreciation but havent you guessed by my insanely long reviews that there isnt a single bit of this story that i have felt anythig but intense joy at reading? EXPLODES! yeah, that spontaneous combustion was just a token of my appreciation
Nakhti 2003-08-04 ch 11,	abuseSir Hugo and his entourage considered me a rather gauche and badly-dressed representative of my inferior gender in any case, i say, thats a bit harsh of him! I think Miss evelyn is an exceptionally well turned out little filly! "Fawhaw!" would you mind terribly explaining what on earth this onomatopoeic exclamation is? i dont believe i have ever heard anyone effuse such a strange and curious expression! now, of course, it's all thoroughly bolloxed oh, bravo! did you read me previous review and then rewrite this bit, or did you just pre-empt me? fantastic, me favourite word! i think i used it in my fic as well... Well, my dear, old Akenaten may have been balmy as a bat, but he wasn't stupid, was he? er, im not too sure about that. i have been reliably informed by my contact in the afterlife that he is in fact as thick as two short planks! Shock, horror! gasp was Evy really going to shoot him? she..she couldnt...could she? oh i say! that was a dashed naughty bit of profanity on Ricky's behalf!now why is evy getting all high and mighty about her knowing it was wrong when she had a bloody damn good try at killing him herself! if she hadnt forgotten the safty she would have shot the blighter! haha, Johnny being sick! actually, im surprised he isnt sick more often, what with all the booze he habitually imbibes. "Evie, I do believe I'm dying," was Jonathan's contribution to the conversation. bloody great big girls blouse!
Nakhti 2003-08-03 ch 10,	abusecor blimey, ricks been around the block a wee bit! didnt even take his boots off? cant remember names and faces? the total *! It was just an act, a way to pass the time, something I was better at than paying them compliments or listening to them talk. screws up face and does very unattractive donkey laugh* "Exhaustion, my lily-white arse. You could smell it on her." now THAT was funny! and not for the reason you probably intended. let me explain; you can smell jonathan's lily white arse on her? euw! "But damn it, man, it just isn't sporting to get a girl so blind drunk she can't tell you from the bedpost." exactly what in the name of JEHOVAH was she doing to that bedpost??!! oh good, rick gets to exact some revenge on the 'crackpot' guy. i will be watching this space avidly for that. youre definitely warming up... wanted her so much it hurt? hmm, im guessing he needs more loose fitting trousers then! oh wow, theyre '**-faced' already and its not even over the yard arm yet! love the carousing, and the salacious banter, and the raucus drunkeness and the everything! but i seriously knew there was something not quite right about those chappies...(never trust the englishman in a film- he's usually a baddie. take Alan Rickman for instance) well, i guess that was a short review (?)

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