Yeah, I can see Harry Connick Jr getting *me* in the mood to write some Harlequin action! And it was Harlequin, but that's ok because you didn't use my pet-hate word *orbs* and no-one actually wants to read about realistic sex anyway!

The 1st chapter had me laughing like a drain with the whole tailor thing, especially once they left and as ever, your Jonathan was just wonderful. I really liked that the bad guys turned out to be some rather unscrupulous fellows covering their tracks, that was a neat twist, but I do think Rick was terribly soft on them, even though it was at Evie's request lol.

I want to keep Jonathan for my own and take him home with me, I've decided.

i love it

(LOVE IT! I KNOW ITS LIKE YEARS LATE BUT ITS REALLY GOOD. HAVE YOU SEEN THE NEW MOVIE. IT BOMBED! REALLY BAD. THEY SHOULD HAVE STAYED IN EGYPT. THEY COULD AT LEAST HAVE BROUGHT ARDETH WITH THEM. HE WAS A GOOD ASSET. DON'T YOU THINK!!?)

I really enjoyed myself while reading this – which I did in one shot coz once I started reading, I couldn’t stop. Your sense of humor is brilliant. I giggled like a maniac right thru while reading this. I also love the way you have captured the characters so perfectly.

Fabulous writing. Thanks for sharing.

i have been looking for a decent Mummy fanfic, and by god i have found it. this was awesome. brilliant. very funny, in character and i'd love to quote to you my favorite lines but there are too many. i wish there were more authors in this fandom like you.

lovely story, i really enjoyed it! =)

Better late than never, right? :)
Yes, it's me again, 4 and a half years after you finished this story. But I still felt obliged to telling you how much I loved it. You write so fantastically well and I absolutely love the humor in your stories.
I also marvel at how well you can describe things from a woman's POV and than right in the next chapter switch to the man's perspective. Really great and absolutely believable and true to the characters.
Are you still writing (Mummy) fanfiction? I'd love to read more stuff written by you! :)

Pearl

Aww, poor Jonathan xD

Haha, I KNEW you were too good of a writer to let them off the hook just like that =D Kudos to your brilliant writing!!

Hahaha! I love how all your stories are connected together!! Your allusion to Evelyn's Arabic ("What are they after?" whispered Evelyn, whose Arabic was limited primarily to 'I am sorry for the mess I have made of your shop'.) was pricless =D It gave me a goofy smile for a long time!

Aww! Rick really was incredibly dashing in this one! ^^

Hehe, I love your stories my dear! They are highly amusing, and you have the characters down brilliantly. I know this by reading the second chapter!

:D

aka jonnycarnahan aka Sheri

Hello! It's been quite a while since you wrote this wonderful story, and I was wondering if anymore Mummy fiction might be in your future? You are extremely talented and I adore how you write Jonathan as well as Jonathan and Evie ... their relationship as siblings is the best in the fandom!

Hugs!

Sheri

Once upon a time, there was a very beautiful girl named Molly. Molly was absolutely perfect in every way imaginable, and everyone loved her. Now, one day, Molly was off being a Mummy junkie, as she was prone to be, and she stumbled across a HORRIFIC story.

Luckily, it wasn't this one.

Later, she came across THIS story, and fell in love. After much convincing, the story agreed to marry her. And they were very happy. They had four little ficlet children named The Distance, Coming Clean, Sweet As This, and Surrender.

Savvy? ( And don't I sound cool, using that word? I think I do. Oh, yes,)

Hey Eve,
I just thought i'd let you know that, inspired by your story, i am reading 'Crocodile on the Sandbank'- and i love it! i heartily thank you for the recommendation, which i have passed on to my Egyptology student housemate, and she loves it too!
Its really amusing to suddenly happen upon one of your chapter titles in the narrative as well!
Im re-reading your story afterwards, and i will probably print it out and give that to my housemate too!
you just have to write more, either an update of deja vous (tap tap tap, im WAITING!! heehee) or another story altogether. I just LOVE your writing!!
Nakhti