The thought of Gungans dying to help save the very people that hand scorned them is both touching and chilling.

Again, I love the varying and deliciously subtle references to a much deeper Gungan culture than I would guess even GL imagines ;)

~Sache8

That was brilliant! It gave the Gungan race more depth than in the movie,and it was well written too. I liked it a lot. ^_^ And I really liked General Yoss.

General Ceel isn't in the movie?? I knew it, I knew it!!! But I didn't find him in the database either ^_~ LOL . . . ANYWAY, groovy, groovy story!! ^_^ I like General Yoss . . . Woman power! LOL! Hey, have you ever read the comic book story "The Death of Captain Tarpals"? It's a lil pre-TPM fic, and it reveals that Tarpals and Jar Jar were actually friends ^_^ It's a cute read, but kinda sad, too . . .

WoW!!! :)
I'm Impressed! This is a great idea that you came up with!
...One thing though; I looked all over SW.com and couldn't find info on General Yoss. Where'd you find out about her? I HAVE TO KNOW!!!