Nice cliffhanger. The story alltogether could be the precursor to the final fight between Rainbow and the princess. It dose have a Star Wars feel to it. It would almost be like episodes 4-6 with the plot.

That's not good.

Krys and the princess are siblings? Now that's a plot twist.

A silly movie eh? I take it that it was actually a lot more violent and dangerous huh?

Hmm, so the dude's ghost is haunting his own house. NEXT CHAPTER!

Hey I was right... sort of. I messed up the king of shadows' name but I did guewss that the darkness was him. You know, I'm really starting to get into this story.

that sucked! i hate you! i cant think of anything ele evil to say!

Eeep! Just when you think things are going well. . .Ah well. Good work! There isn't enough pro writers who do fanfic, this is a good example of why there should be more. Real storis, not power trips or pointless parodys. It rocks folks!

BTW Any chance of a Shanda/Rainbow crossover? Shelly Pledger would have to draw that one, the cuteness factor would be through the roof. I'm getting cavitys just thinking about it. . .

Eh neat o.o

94K, and no reviewers? That's just wrong. Especially because this was an excellant story with great characterization. Nice job!