I can understand being in love with two people, always a hard decision. Good luck!

this story is kinda weird for me.. did bella just really realized he loved another man on her wedding day? and she said that edward was her universe? whats up with that? weird..

Such a hard thing to be in love with two different people and not wanting to hurt either of them.

Good luck in the contest.

Love, CL82

I like this story.

Occasionally the dialogue felt a little stiff "that's wonderful to hear."

but other than that I thought you did a great job of having both characters (jacob and edward) be good.

and not turning it into melodrama.

it felt real.