"I tie him up in a bow like a present nobody will ever get to open." Loved that line. I'd love to see a sequel to this, or another chapter really, how does the cooking go?

Brilliantly in character though, I loved it.

AH! Kitchen! He's helping her! And I love how he explains about cooking science. True!

odd, I actually rather enjoyed this, but I am unsure why; you write the characters perfectly. Thank you (:

Love it