Spectacular! I've always thought of Noah like this, unsure and unconfident...but you've brought out the best in him!

Great story! The plot was interesting and it was a neat look into Noah's character. The story could stand to be edited though. There needs to be more periods and commas to break up the sentences and there's a few sentences that don't make sense with the word choices that were made. But everything was still perfectly readable. Great story though and I can't wait to see what else you write in the future.

Touching story, loved it xo