Nice. Keep writing

wow...this is such a cool rendering of malcolm. it's nice to know he still was able to do something even after he left...

i don't blame him. i really don't.

I love how understanding they are about Malcolm leaving, especially with the way Colin reacts when Zach leaves. Possibly hypocritcal, but I credit it to Ravenclaw logic and coolheadedness.

I feel bad for Malcolm, I'd always seen him as halfway committed and just there, but now I see the struggle he must've had. He was younger than most of them and trying to protect himself and his family. After seeing what happened to Renny... I can't imagine it.

love it so far! keep writing and i cant wait for more! :D