omg this was really awsome i listened to the song while reading it

That was awesome! I love this song, even though I only just heard it for the first time today.

Your title wasn't the best, but I couldn't think of a better one, so what the hay.

Great job! XD

A very nice songfic. For the most part you made the lyrics really work for the story, and i like the song the Black Parade, so that made it enjoyable too. :)

That was one of the best songfics I've ever read! Mostly because "Welcome to the black parade" is one o the coolest songs ever, sorry to askthis in the review but when are you going to post the other OCs you'll be using in your story? Anyway I think this was great so please keep writing!