|Reviews for What I Wished For|
| TheUnderStudy 3/31/12 . chapter 30
SQUEEEEEE! Oh Edward I love you dear boy! This was just perfect and everything I'd hoped for! Oh swoonage factor 9000!
| TheUnderStudy 3/31/12 . chapter 29
I am so in love with this story and if I wasn't ready pregnant, I'd have it's babies lol.
Glad that Charlie found someone and that he's happy. I love the way that Bella handled Jared. What a jerk, but now a well informed jerk
| TheUnderStudy 3/31/12 . chapter 28
*fans self* reunited and it feels so damn good. Damn! Lol what a great surprise and in so glad Edward did this for her. But yes Bella it's time to talk to Alice hun. Oh and how they support each other is so wonderful!
| TheUnderStudy 3/31/12 . chapter 27
Oh dear...lol...well that was a lot more reverent than mine I'll tell ya. That was so sweet and romantic and I just loved it. Edward so owes Bella though. Lol.
Oh and she met Katie! She has to meet Alice!
| BelieveItOrNot 3/30/12 . chapter 35
So much love. :')
I really love that instead of just giving us a sex scene, you added to the story - loved the dynamic between Edward and his family.
Bye bye. *sniff*
| TheUnderStudy 3/30/12 . chapter 26
Edward is a dreamy fantabulous man! I'm do glad they are working it out. And yay Charlietime!
| TheUnderStudy 3/30/12 . chapter 25
Really liked the date and so glad that Edward is keeping his promise to take things slow. However! Lol! I am also glad that Bella is coming into her own, that her confidence is coming back. And lawd! Did no one talk to her about orgasms? I cant say they I'm not surprised. My mother didn't tell me about this either lol. Once I learned I was like Bella at the end, "May I have another?" LMAO
| BelieveItOrNot 3/30/12 . chapter 34
Love the Clara name. It's so fitting.
I liked getting a glimpse into Emmett's mind, too. The part where he saves Edward was so sad, especially mixed in with all this happiness. I like that it was placed that way, don't get me wrong.
I'm reluctant to finish this story. I'll miss these guys. They must've been hard for you to let go.
| BelieveItOrNot 3/30/12 . chapter 33
Great idea for the epilogue beginning with the magazine write up. Seeing Edward through the "public's" eyes.
"But darkness doesn't last, yeah? Light always follows. But sometimes you can't see it though, and that's when you need someone else to hold that lantern for you. To keep telling you it's there, that there is hope, that you will get through today."
So beautiful, and pretty much the theme of your story right there.
"why do you have to be so fucking sweet all the time?"
I would like this question answered, as well...
"Less cryptic words and more nakedness,"
She is so damn cute!
Sorry for my grammar mistakes in my last review. I noticed them when it was too late. (This stuff drives me crazy when I can't edit.)
| TheUnderStudy 3/30/12 . chapter 24
OH THANK THE TWIGODS LOL! We made it! They are together. *crying*
| BelieveItOrNot 3/30/12 . chapter 32
aw, when Bella talked like Edward, "yeah?" Tears in my eyes. I'm not even kidding. That totally threw me off. You're so, so good at the subtle little zingers! I love them.
And then she got to wear her red. Red wrap, red ring. So happy for her. And there again, with the "red" theme. It's not "hit you over the head" but it's enough to know it's significance to Bella, and Edward giving her and being what she wants.
"Fuck, Bella, you look so bloody sexy." I know bloody is a common word used, but the way he says it here, I have to know if this (along with the red) is a nod to canon. I want to think that the red signifies Bella's new life, as in canon, in her new life, she'd have red eyes. Am I way off?
Also, the tattoo rings thing is absolute genius. I love when traditional things get an unorthodox twist, quirks like that add to the wonderful characterization.
There couldn't have been a dry eye in the place after Edward's speech!
MusicianGroomWard in a Fedora is so sexy!
How much do I love that Bella had a big something up her sleeve as well? There relationship is so well balanced.
Amazing journey, love! Thank you so much for sharing.
| BelieveItOrNot 3/30/12 . chapter 31
They are so happy. :')
Everything about this chapter was cute, cute, cute!
I especially love their banter.
I'm almost to the end. :(
| TheUnderStudy 3/30/12 . chapter 23
Bella...you're killing me honey. But I know you gotta plummet yourself before you can rise and be the beautiful woman we know you are.
| TheUnderStudy 3/30/12 . chapter 22
You sure do know how to write a story. This chapter, this start of the separation is so strong that I can feel it through the site.
| TheUnderStudy 3/30/12 . chapter 21
I was pacing the room reading this chapter. I had hope to God that she was not going to read some fucking planned speech that was going to degrade her and sing his son's praises. She was so strong. And Edward came! yay! And Sarah and Rebecca...that scene just touched my heart.