I just want to announce that I am still reading this, although I didn't review the first chapters. I honestly didn't know what to say. I rambled so much about them before you restarted the story.

A lot of Daken in this one. You probably already know that I'm not a Daken fan, but I like the way you protail him. He isn't as annoying as he is in the comics.

I still loved Vic's part most. He is really arrogant here, but I think that is a big part of him. Maybe arrogance isn't quite the right word, it is rather strong confidence in himself and his own abilities which somethimes borders to arrogance.

I think Vic is definitly underestimating Daken, though.

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Wonderful chapter. I have noticed that you asked if you should continue on this story, but label it accordingly or you should start as a new story. Personally I for one would rather you continue on this story, it will make things a lot easier for readers.

I cannot wait to read more and watch as Wolverine goes evil.

So update as soon as you can.

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Wow, i just luv readin things like this with these fun to read!

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Beautiful chapter, I enjoyed reading this chapter. It waz fun.

Keep writing despite the lack of reviewing from idiots who aren't reviewing.

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This is grand. I love it. I can't believe you don't have more reviews then this. Anyway's great story, great chapter and I love the back and forth they have going.

When is Sabes going to top Wolvie? You said this is slash and if it's like the first version, then that should be soon right?

Update soon!

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You're re-writing this? So far this is such a great re-start!

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Edited? Why? Well, it's a great edit so don't worry your pretty head 'bout it.

I love the detail though, you're making me feel what Wolvie feel and think, same with good ol' Sabes. So when is Sabes going to make Wolvie his bitch?

Great chapter! Great story! Can't wait to read more.

This is very intruging and I would like to read more. You do however, have a lot of grammatical errors (misused words, tense changes, and words that got cut off at the beginning of paragrpahs)that you would do well to clean up. It would make this great beginning that much better. :)