Really good work! I like your writing style and the plot :)

Wow! Love it! PLEASE continue!

I really love your story so far! It's very intriguing and I haven't read a fic where Tate is written like this, it's unique but also authentic to the show. Keep up the awesomeness. (:

Good story, hope to see more chapters of this come out soon.

I wonder what Violet would think if she could hear his thoughts?At least he calmed himself down, this time anyway.

Love it! Please update? :)

This is really really good! You managed to capture the voices of characters we don't really know all that well yet and make them seem authentic. I loved the glimpses of Tate's life pre-shooting (even if he doesn't know it yet). Is this a oneshot? I'm not really sure how'd you continue it but I'd love to see you try because you really are an excellent writer here. Great job!

brilliant very well written!

Nice work. Plan on continuing?

I liked this very much. Especially "this part would do anything for her, would go farther than just sticking his fingers down her throat to save her. This part knows he probably will have to. Probably sooner, rather than later."