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Soumyee
2007-11-13 . chapter 5
hi there...interesting piece of work...wont you please finish it?? please...
Fortune Hunter
2007-03-08 . chapter 5
Hi. Can you please continue this great story? I had read this 3 or 4 years ago and loved it.

Thank you.
Rainstorm Elegance
2007-02-09 . chapter 5
Aw!! This story is so ADORIBLE! And for a first, Akane isn't that violent!! Also I'm a sucker for Ranma-baby stories. I really think he would be a wonderful father. And for a matter of fact I just love it when men have paternal instincts and arent afraid to show them. It's so CUTE! hehehehe...Anyway. I love the story and the plot is great! I like the way it's coming along and am really curious as to whether or not you'll be adding the appearance of the other fiancees. Please update soon. I would love to know what happens next!!
Dark
2006-10-17 . chapter 5
PLEASE CONTINUE THE STORY. PLEASE!
JenJen
2006-02-20 . chapter 5
I really like this story :) I cant wait for the next chapter. ^.^ Please continue writing ^.^
-Jen
draconis_rose
2005-09-29 . chapter 5
plz plz rite more this is so good
i love ur version of ranma 1/2 so much!
Materia-Blade
2005-05-18 . chapter 5
When exactly is the next chap comin? Lol. Oh my god you havent updated in two years... I shouldn't have read it. Now I feel inspired again. Thanks for the great read.

Jingoro. Haven't I read works from you before?

(Jingoro. The cat from Kimaguri Orange Road?)
Dream
2005-05-17 . chapter 5
PLEASE write more. It's so interesting. I want to know who the baby is. Is she gonna turn out to be Ranma and Akane's kid? It would be a neat idea. But that's just a thought, hope you'll write more.
ADD kid
2005-01-06 . chapter 5
Amazing story. I simply love it.
kimiko_9732
2004-12-27 . chapter 5
I cant say its original but I like it better this way. And also I agree Ranma's nice, COOl.

Please Update!! (It's about time,I guess)
Raver
2004-12-16 . chapter 5
This is my favourite chapter so far. You made Ranma and Akane bathroom incident so CUTE! I love it. Now stop reading reviews and start writting!
Raver
2004-12-16 . chapter 4
Man, I just love the new and improved
ranma! Cool
Raver
2004-12-16 . chapter 3
Yo! I like your stile a lot, but you might want to change the structure of these sentences



Each starts with a he. I have a similar problem writting that is in my case a lot more frequent. This is not a critic, more an advice.
Raver
2004-12-16 . chapter 2
Please don't make Kasumi fall for Ranma. Please!
All in all, a very sweet chapter
Raver
2004-12-16 . chapter 1
This is probably the best alternate beginning and the change of Ranma's character! Can't wait to read the rest of it
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