Wow-wow-wow, it's powerful!I think, you succeeded in showing Smeagol's possession for the Ring. And the ending is scary in some way, I feel bad about Deagol... 0_o

Nice fic :)

Interestin but a little dark . . .

i like the ending part it was good

Cool. I haven't read LOTR in awhile but that seemed pretty close to the book. Keep up the good work!

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interesting. thdere are very few Smeagol Stories keep it up.

GASP! I wrote a fic similar to this so I just had to read it. It was creepy in Smeagol's POV. I loves this! You really got into his head.

My preciousss

Skye

A very pretty fic. I likes it. You do a wonderful job, capturing that strange oddity of thought that makes Smeagol so creepily adorable. I especially liked the last line. Nicely done! _

Nice...very dark, in a good way.

That is really cool and well written, but *very* disturbing, especially the last line. That was really good :)

Wow, that last line was CREEPY! different take on the story, really neat

warped. I like!

cool.

smeagol rocks