Ethan is a bad guy? O.o

Really, really good story.
If I might add: I can help you with the German phrases. Of course, only if you want me to. :D

contiue

Sound like a good story, so will there be a little romance between Hanna and the boy? Please update soon.

This is a great story so far, and I'm glad Hanna decided to bring Sophie along for the ride. I really hope you keep writing this story because there just aren't enough Hanna fanfics out there, and you're writing one that updates semi-regularly, which makes you my hero. Well done, and please keep up the awesome work. :)

- Koona

it is really good pleasssse keep updating update as soon as possible

Interesting, I can't wait for the next one. Keep on writing!

So the guy is another abnormal like them, right? And he's trying to gather them all up and fight against the CIA! Am I right? Probably not, but I'll learn the long way. Reading this epic story! This is so interesting, I cna't help wanting more and more to read. But don't think you have to rush and update, a good chapter is worth more than quickler chapters. Lovelly done!

ohh sounds interesting, wonder wat this file thing is about. Update soon please :))

This is a cool story, and I can't wait to know what happens. But I believe you should not have just dialogue, remember we want to have more description in it. Be actually able to see it in our head, like a movie. Also when you flip back and forth between places and who's talking it gets a bit confusing. Other than that, I really like the story and I still will even if you don't take my advice. I think it's creative so far and that Hanna won't know what hit her (if my guessing is correct)... or she might. If she still has her father's tips remembered. Always be prepared, even when you're sleeping. Or soemthing rather. Anyways, keep writing even if you don't get many reviews, it's a rather unknown fandom so far. Great story!

Hm... I think this story has potential. I think some things could use a little fleshing out, but there's good material here. The Hanna fandom definitely needs some longer stories, so I hope you decide to continue this. It will be interesting to see how the two 'abnormals' interact with each other.

Ohh, this sounds interesting... i cant wait to read more, i love hanna and am thrilled that theres another story to read. Update soon, i cant wait to find out what happens next :D