Simple: I think Zorg's alive.

(That wouldn't be a dissapointment for me, just read my profile.)

Shame this story was never finished.

O' My Goshk, dude where are you. You so have to finish this story, it freaking rocks. Come on don't keep us waiting!

awsome story! great job. keep up the good work. and get another chapter up. I'm dieing.

This is awesome. I need more. FEED ME!

your story needs one thing RUBY you must add him

dude that kickd major ass write more plase

This was a really interesting story added to the fifth element. It was good and it seems to carry suspense with the ending and craziness with the family. The one thing I couldn't even think of though was that Korben and Leeloo would have five children. It also seems that Leeloo has gone really crazy with all that shit. Besides I can't imagine Leeloo and Korben turning out that way. I just seem to think it needs more adventure.

i've only just now gotten around to reading this. it's a very good story and you should update, just don't put so many words that some can't speak.

AHHHHH, that was a close one for un Korban Dallas and Leelo-multi-pass! Can't wait for the next chapter! Please continue!

/Super_Saiyajin no Ouji\ sends...

AHHHHH NOOOOO! Must have more! this sounds really good! I can just imagine this in movie form...::::sigh:::: I really wish they would make the sequal...well anyways keep up the good writting!

/Super_Saiyajin no Ouji\ sends...

Great idea and great story

Please keep it up

Wow, what a great idea! Very creative of you, and I definitely cant wait to find out what happens. Larrita is so funny, and the Family Life chapter was hilarious with her little sister. Please keep writing!