Great story! A few errors like caps in the wrong places and some times things tended to move a little to fast. But it was a lovely story line and oh, the fluff! Good job!

The fluff, the fluff... Love it, very sweet.

Awwwwww...

Loved the story. I can see it happening and I love how he kept his cool and figured it out it was a nightmare. Keep writing!

Nice start... As you said It caught my attention. There's, however, many questions... How does she know Superman is Clark? Why Richard haven't said anything when she had said Clark, does he now too? I think you take the sequence after Superman been beat up in the movie, but may be it's the impression you want to give. Anyway nice story so far.