I truly wish you would finish this. Magnificent writing. I was completely enthralled from the first setence.

The matter-of-fact tone fits well with a story more centered around plot and character development than fluffy filler chapters, a highly enjoyable read. You strive for originality and it pays of.

I have a faint idea of where the story would be heading from now on, and i plead to you to finish it because i must know. While imagining it is satisfying, i would be deeply grateful to read it in your words.

With admiration.

I hate you! Larissa is the name of my childhood crush!

I love your story but I am slightly miffed that you used Larissa as the name of the sadistic bastard that tortured Ayuri's sister... Ok more than slightly miffed...

Anyways I noticed some typos in the story but seeing as how I am in a bad mood I will refrain from saying anything about those for now.

The story seriously is good though... If you want to reply to me PM nesselde... I need to go vent on a punching bag.

-Love and thorns

Ivy Rose Thorns

Oh boy, this is going to be good! Hope that Ayuri discovers what is happening to Keleria. Anyways, update soon!

another great chapter, i'm looking forward for the next chapter

This is a great story, its gripping and the characters really likeable. Keep going

I'm back! Sorry I haven't been reading much, college work n all but yes! Finished re-reading through this revised "Tales of a Warrior" and I'll tell ya,this is perfect! I remembered briefly that the past story didn't have nearly as much depth and complexity of emotions as this one. Much more detail in how emotions are experienced in the midst of action. Action! Very good with action scenes, unlike many people are which takes time to perfect as I've tried . . . and it still doesn't sound right T_T

Your gripe with video games, MUCH shared! God, it's so annoying how society can portray death and killing so easily while "genitals and tits" will be taped up. (Spelling error by the way xD)

Last comment before I continue to the next arch, amazing sex scene! I've read hundreds of fictions and I'll tell ya this, you took it slow and detailed where many others tend to rush things. Actually, I correct my statement. You wrote a love scene, tender and affectionate and not needy and obsessive. There's a time and place for those but between two caring individuals, more than not it's the former option than the later.

Anyway, keep up the great work! Keep writing!

aaah! great twist, this is just so good, can't wait for the next chapter

I hate when I'm proven wrong X.x, but whatever, I suppose Ayuri won't be saddened now. I STILL THINK HER SISTER IS EVIL, SHE IS RUINING THEIR SOLITUDE IN EACH OTHER :(. Interesting to see what happens soon, and also sad that you didn't even give them a proper kiss when they were alone D:

Killer - Nevali?

95% sure that Ayuri's sister is the killer at this point. I miss Keleria and Ayuri's blooming romance :(, it seems absent as of late- but I complain about this all the time lol. Interesting chapter, I like the progression, despite the lack of love.

I like this chapter :P, nice progression. I just hope that Ayuri doesn't end up getting hurt, and that Kelaria is able to protect her if need be :)

I sure do love is story, great chapter!

I like the part where Keleria is fighting with the person holding her armor hostage

I'll admit, I'm a bit disappointed that you're now following the path of a dark story. It's so easy to give into the way of completely destroying any semblance of reason, and utterly destroy their free will. It's just a shame to see such a good, one-of-a-kind light, fluffy in a way story, take a turn into something where the main characters aren't even in control of themselves. I'm not even sure how they're able to muster up passion, how they can live normal lives at ALL after witnessing their horribly bloodthirsty actions. I can understand the violent need for revenge, but the possession is seriously just a bad card to play, as it's so disgustingly inhuman, it makes the main characters blank shells, and destroys the view of them while their "Counterparts" are in control. It makes them not even themselves, and no person would ever willingly submit to this, especially if it's that violent and disturbing.

I sincerely hope I can continue to read this, as it's been a wonderful story thus far, and still is fairly good, but it's growing a bit distasteful.

Whoa this is a lot more than the snippet you showed me on facebook. Helllloooooo there.