I actually read this for the first time maybe five or six years ago, and it's one of the few Seiftis fics that I vaguely remember. Reading it again brings back that same exhilarating feeling, because you've contrived such an incredibly captivating plotline. In fact, I think it could translate well to the big screen. My favorite? The club scene, of course! I don't know whether or not you intend to finish the fic, but I really like what you already have. Now I'm on to read your other one.

lovely! but please...UPDATE! pls...üü

whut up (again)? nice story!
but u need to fin. good luck!
hehe jk u da bomb at writing!
l8ter den

He NEEDS TO update the story soon so we can read the rest of it..

HEY! ...This isn't the END, is it?

It can't be! ...but but you haven't updated since 2002!

...YOU CAN'T LEAVE ME! You ...MADE ME PREGNANT ACK!

ACK QUISY!

Oh crap; I only have one more chappy to READ NOO THE HORROR!

Oh poo; He'd better NOT HARM QUISTY GIRL!

Awesome chapter; heehee!

Who the hell is the freak? Probably a seed...hehhe.

Great chapter.

The mob thing is such a turn on ACK!

Sexy badasses...Great chapter!

XD

Hehehehe Seiferpoo thinks Quisty is a goddess MUHAHAHA!

Great chapter.

Hehehehe Such an amusing chapter.

...hehehe I love the mob/badass thing...hehehehe! HAHAHAHA!

...oh crap.

Seifer sure is a sexy badass OOH.

Awesome chapter. My vocabulary isn't very big so I use 'awesome' a lot...you don't mind, do you?

OOH This fic is really interesting and fascinating!

MUHAHAHA I SOUND LIKE A DORK!

BAKA ME!

Oh well, great chapter Dalpal.

Hehehehe; you'll love me forever...yeah right ANYWAY!

Awesome start.

Are you going to continue this?