 Writing bunny 4/29/12 . chapter 21Good chapter.
I know I complained about it many times before and I don't want to sound like a broken record, but the way the characters are not talking about important things is really tiresome. I want to kick them. Can you do it for me?
That said, I have a bad feeling about Souja. He's abouit to rush off alone. Is he even going to return?
I wonder how will Katsura's visit into Seireitei go.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter. |
 karina001 4/29/12 . chapter 21You write this so well. I love a complex tale and you excell at them. |
 IgNighted 4/29/12 . chapter 21Good chapter. Heard from Ryuu now so I'm content. |
 Writing bunny 4/18/12 . chapter 20I got a funny idea about Koku. Is he perhaps Kohaku? The prophetic dream would suggest so.
Isn't Tenichi's sudden interest in Shikiki going to bring more attention to him? If somebody asks her whether she told him about Daisuke's grave and she replies that she did so just yesterday, that's going to be highly suspicious.
I wonder what's Katsura planning to do. He's really in a tough spot. |
 Writing bunny 4/18/12 . chapter 19Good chapter. I liked seeing how Keitarou really is crazy under his calm exterior. Poor Katsura. He's caught between a hammer and an anvil.
I liked seeing Kai finally. It looks like threads are being connected and things done finally. And more detail on Kurotsuchi's backstory was good too. |
 Writing bunny 4/18/12 . chapter 18Ow, why did Joumei forbid Souja to speak about their suspicions? Poor communication strikes again.
I liked Kurotsuchi's backstory. I'd like to see more. What made him so messed up?
It looks like things are going to get even more complicated. |
 Writing bunny 4/18/12 . chapter 17Good chapter. Kurotsuchi is an interesting character. I wonder what his backstory is. |
 IgNighted 4/15/12 . chapter 20The chapter was shorter than usual but still pretty good. I am liking Katsura's story now and his sense of morality is quite interesting. |
 Notchka 4/12/12 . chapter 20Wow. Now I'm desperate to know more about Koku and his gift... whatever it is. How utterly haunting.
Tenichi (and by extension Keitarou) is daft to think that everyone would naively believe that he remembers nothing from his misadventure. Bit of a stretch, unless you plan on undermining that conceit with a "rescue" from one of his friends who understands that he "can't" talk about whatever happened. Said friend determining the truth through alternate means to save him from his fate if he told all.
All in all. Excellent chapters as usual. Can't wait to read more. |
 karina001 4/10/12 . chapter 20An interesting and dangerous talent to have and very trying on the nerves. Easily misinterpreted too. It just keeps getting better. |
 karina001 4/4/12 . chapter 19Ah, such game playing. Things are not quite as together as a particular individual thinks they are. I wonder if he would treat his daughter as shabbily as he treated his son? Hmmm, loving the way this is going. |
 flowergod613 4/3/12 . chapter 19it s probabaly just me, but is koku suzuki? |
 IgNighted 4/2/12 . chapter 19I like Katsura a bit more now. I was surprised at how his father treated him. My God I was shocked that he was that low. Still, good chapter. Nice to see some more Ukitake and Kai interaction and I like Koku as well. He seems to be that reliable mediator and guardian one can always trust to be ruthless at times and other times kind. |
 Writing bunny 3/26/12 . chapter 16Good chapter. |
 Writing bunny 3/26/12 . chapter 15Good chapter.
I can't decide whether it's sad or funny to see the characters running around in circles thanks to insufficient communication. |