 eternallyhisqueeninMirkwood 5/30/08 . chapter 1i like this a lot! young estel, kinda grows up to fall romantically for his foster father... thats a little messed up, but good story |
 napafun 4/10/07 . chapter 1wow i never read ElrondEstel slash before but this one's good! |
 Cartoonheart 1/27/04 . chapter 1This is a really good fic! Well, except for the Aragorn/Elrond thing.. I don't think that they schould be slashed..
/Alandria |
 Sremla 5/27/03 . chapter 1Eh...a bit confusing, at the end. There's a repeated paragraph from earlier on, and it doesn't really make sense. Also, where's Legolas? Isn't this supposed to be Legolas/Aragorn/Elrond slash?
Other than that this is really good. Nicely described, emotions and details very well portrayed. Good job!
)Sremla |
 goldfinger 6/1/02 . chapter 1 beautifull, really |
 Furius 5/4/02 . chapter 1strange, utterly strange but well-written, but what did you mean exactly when you said transparent cloak, what sort of elvish material were you referring to |
 Nuniel 5/3/02 . chapter 1 Quite different fic, but... breathtaking. I enjoyed especially the poetic quality and the unusual pairing. Elrond seemed kinda feminine, but it was an interesting change. More to come? Please? ;-) |
 fae touched 5/3/02 . chapter 1That's so sweet. I love strawberries. |
 di 5/3/02 . chapter 1aww por leggy! but aragorn is so swweet with the strawberries and the flowers! aww, lol he so funny when he kills the bugs! |