|Reviews for The Keepsake|
| NobodyButHim 4/14/13 . chapter 16
But I have to say "phew!" I was thinking you might have been trying to get Bella changed already by giving her the flu and I thought nooooooo! I'm glad you didn't do that ;)
Wedding and baby for Bella and Edward would be so cute!
| breakingdawn57 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Enjoy your easy to read style! Such a sweet chapter. Edward was so sweet taking care of Bella. Next chapter please.
| KT8812 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Wohoo! I never feel bad about the delay in your posting, for when you do post, it is so worth the wait.
So we'll be seeing a hybrid pregnancy then? I can't wait for it, will it be like the one in the original twilight series with all the rib cracking, or will it be more tame?
Always looking forward to more.
| Bled Dry 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Perfection, as always.
Take as much time as you need between chapters. It just gives me time to reread your other stories.
| aAnnalise 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Idle about Bella and Edward but I wouldn't want to have a child that would eventually die and I will continue living forever. Sounds heartbreaking to me.
| staceleo 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Fantastic chapter! Thank you!
| Reinbeau 4/14/13 . chapter 16
She was so sick, poor Edward was scared out of a couple decades of vamp life.
He wants it! This will be interesting.
| Twilovingmama 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Beautiful chapter. Their love is so strong and pure. Your writing is amazing and enchanting. Thank you.
| NKubie 4/14/13 . chapter 16
What a wonderful chapter! Definitely worth the wait!
So much has happened here. My heart broke for Edward when Bella was her sickest. I knew she'd survive, but the fact that it brought him back a hundred years was so difficult for him.
It was so nice for Edward to really open up about his life. His illness. To know that his last human thought was sadness also hurt my heart. Certainly explains why he was always so emo. LOL
It's refreshing to see them know about Bella getting pregnant and speaking about it openly. Again, this version of them as a couple is better then canon, imo.
And can I say how much I love the Cullens. Even Rosalie. :)
Best of luck on your original story. I'll have to keep my eyes peeled.
| Cullenfan524 4/14/13 . chapter 16
That was so good! I love the little changes you made to the vamps characteristics! I just really hope their isn't an imprint! I like that they still age...it makes more sense, since they are half human! But can they be changed to a complete vamp?
Congrats on your book!
| tinaconnor 4/14/13 . chapter 16
I like ths twist. I am assuming that part of the liberties you take with SM's vampire characteristics is that while not easy, the pregnancy isn't going to be the horror show it was in the book or the movie. And please since you are taking liberties name the child anything but Renessme. Just sayin'. That truly was awful.
| robward17 4/14/13 . chapter 16
GOD how I LOVE this story! Just..brilliant! Adored hearing more about his past, sad as it is. Loved how the whole family took care of her, especially Rose! That was a nice surprise. Renee's cracking me up with her over the top wedding ideas..yikes! And they can have a baby? That's Awesome! Hope for another chappie soon. Love ya, Linda xo
P.S. Read "Over the Fence"..EPIC EPIC EPIC!
| ChieriAn9eL 4/14/13 . chapter 16
another lovely chapter! I've always found that Edward had this sort of innate sadness within him... probably from the way he died.. and also just how much he hates his existence... I found it interesting that in the books, Bella sort of comments on it in the first book.. and that was that.
| dinotopian 4/14/13 . chapter 16
| MissSherrie 4/14/13 . chapter 16
Just found this tonight after several Twitter recommendations, and am I ever glad that I did. This is a fantastic version of the way things could have gone. I must say, I'm very much enjoying this story!