|Reviews for love at night|
| omg 10/1/12 . chapter 1
not again says jasmine
"caught"says doom his face red as a rose
then they all get cauhgt by gaurds
| Wolfpaw of Winterclan 9/17/12 . chapter 1
I'm sure this is an amazing story, even though I haven't read it, but I do have some constructive critisizom [I can't spell that word, so I apologize]. In your summary, "jasmine" should have a capitolized J, like this: "Jasmine". Your "I" in "i'm" should also be capitolized, and watch out when you spell the word "first". You mispelled it twice in your summary ;)
I'd also recommend getting a beta, but that's your decision. But editing makes a big difference.
Summaries reflect on the story. If you have a lot of typos in the summory, then some people may just skip over the story because they believe the story will have a lot of typos as well. While if a summary has no typos, people are more likely to take a peek.
I wish you luck - After all, we writers have to stick together, right?
| Spottedmask12 9/16/12 . chapter 4
| Alyssa 8/1/12 . chapter 4
I want more story!
| Blessed Yet Cursed 7/26/12 . chapter 4
very good job:)
I hope u continue;)
| Alyssa 7/20/12 . chapter 3
(Review for whole story.) I love this story!
| Ellice123 7/17/12 . chapter 3
It's a good story, and can you please make the next chapter longer:)
| lunaspark2001 5/17/12 . chapter 3
It was a bit funny what barda said "you were screaming her name"
| luvthecheat 3/4/12 . chapter 1
They raped their arms around each other? Haha I'm sorryI've seen rap confused with rape but not wrap. I'm not flamin' you or anything, it's a cute story. But if you watch jacksfilms YGS you would know how much people misssssspell things to become rape and it's irking. Sorry if i sound obnoxious I really think you should keep going, just edit.
| ashwagen 1/9/12 . chapter 1
Congratulations on your first fanfic. I like the story but you might have mispelled some words and revealing JL to early.
But I'm still waiting for chapter 4 :)
| iiBlackRose 12/24/11 . chapter 3
| iiBlackRose 11/26/11 . chapter 2
finish it soon!
It's so cute
| iiBlackRose 11/19/11 . chapter 1
It's so cute! :D