What a great chapter! I loved Odyssey as an episode, mainly because of the presence of Oliver and the JLA. It's great to see some of the scenes reimagined in a fic (especially the scene where Ollie and the guys take out Regan and Tess - awesome!), but what is even better is that you are adding a whole new element to the story. I can't wait to see where this all leads, and how the new Lex dimension is going to play out - I just hope it involves lots of angst, action and drama for our guys!

Thanks for new chapter! So now Oliver will be looking for Chloe?

Great intro to lex and tess. Loved the team action and the small tweaks to what was shown on tv like finding where chloe was, and including bart. Also loved the chlollie coffee scene - it was sweet

Thanks for new chapter so fast... So chloe is aressted for real or like in show Lex took her? I am really waiting for next chapter...

Good Chapter & More Please

I like the clearly identified time and location of each segment. and yay Ollie to the rescue of Chloe (however bit torn about the fact that the team is now going to rescue one, rather than stay in Iran to save hundreds. Chloe said she hoped they chose the world over her)

Another excellent chapter

Great chapter - all those scenes sprang back to life in my mind as I read your words. Loved the Ollie scene, and I can't wait to see what happens when you go AU. If you keep Ollie front and centre, I know I'll be happy!

New layout is just perfect. I love knowing where I am while reading what the characters are doing.

Glad it was Lois calling Oliver to help with Chloe's situation. I know Jimmy's really not a bad guy, at least not right now, but that was still crap him making the deal with Lex. Everyone knows that Lex hates Chloe. Anyhoo hope to read a flashback or something of Lois handing Jimmy his spine on a platter! lol

Awwwww Chlollie is coming! Well at least them in the same vicinity. LoL Can't wait to read the rescue.

Thanks for the update.

Happy writing.

Good Chapter & More Please

I LOVE what you're planning here! Chlollie focus, Lex v. Oliver, the promise of some intense scenes - I'm hooked, and you've only written the prologue! Can't wait for more - looking forward to how it all unfolds.

Fantastic Start. I really like it when Lex is tittering between his belief that he is doing something for the Great Good V his own satisfaction (and sometimes its hard to tell). The version of Lex that you've started with seems to be a very layered guy; he's content and he's willing to sacrifice his life to save the world while giving the guy that works for him the hard word!

Great start, update soon! :)

I just know the Chlollie angst is going to kill me, but that's part of being a die hard fan isn't it?

I'm intrigued and can't wait for more!

Happy writing.