"There is time, so much time left in this life, or so his willing delusions say. " Sigh. Just beautifully written.

Oh Zaedah, I love how you write. I love how you keep going with the moon thing. I love how you made them fit into it. Well done.

Oh, beautiful!

Admittedly, harder to read than a lot of fics; but you've a way of writing that just sounds so ... poetic. It's the kind of writing that one could pluck a few sentences out of, print on posters, and then sell to Tony during his quest to discover the meaning of life :P

... I've no idea what I just said. But yes, this is beautiful.

Favourite sentence: "When he tells her this, promises to bend time into eternity, she looks to the rounded orb above and considers." He would, for her.

Soph

You always write the most gorgeous imagery. Love the picture you paint here.

Is this a story?

One thing to say...

SIGH...

Beautiful, intoxicating language and imagery as usual, Z! You've painted a breathtaking picture here, and it fits these two so well - Ziva seeking the darkness, Tony the light...black and white...yin and yang.

Together, perfect balance. Simply wonderful!